Black Poetry : Out of the clear blue sky.

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  1. YeshuJah

    YeshuJah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    From a distance I knew,
    knew it was you,
    always knew you'd be right on time-
    knew I'd be rich just knowing you,
    wealthy without the clutter of dimes;
    your words-
    full and ripe like Georgia peaches in Summertime,
    resonate within and shake chords without;
    where have you been?

    If eternity were a feeling I'd tell you
    what, how, and why I feel what I felt
    when I first heard your voice-
    but our paths crossed before time was,
    before there was a second that
    could be a minute that could be an hour-

    Love is devoid of reason,
    it has existed, still exists,
    and will exist whatever and despite the season.

    Come to me-
    I've waited for you,
    held my breath for you,
    wandered the wilderness of emotions
    in search of and thirsty for you-
    on moonlit nights I've sensed you near-
    in visions and dreams I've known the fear
    of not ever having you here-

    Then out of the clear blue sky you appear,
    out of the clear blue sky-
    be mine,
    for I'm already thine.
    :heart:
     
  2. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hmmmmmmm...

    to me, this piece is very spiritually fresh...Thank you for expresing yourself poet...I can diggit!! although there is a certain mysteriousness of that blue sky which leaves the mentals wondering, makes this piece all the more intriguing...
     
  3. YeshuJah

    YeshuJah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rashad, thanks for reading the poem. Yes, it has spiritual and physical overtones.

    JAH Bless.
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeshujah...poet, this piece is beautiful. but, you must know? truly, it is. and i agree, with rashad. very well written. forgive me, for i had almost forgotten how beautiful your pieces are because i had not read you in awhile. thank you for blessing us with this piece heyah.
     
  5. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Reading you is always a wondrous ethereal experience .... I get completely bound up in your phrases...and yes, the marriage of spiritual and physical is exquisite!

    thank you... more please :)

    alyce
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i agree with all of the poet(esses) before me.

    awesome peace again,
    jh.
     
  7. YeshuJah

    YeshuJah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    alyce, I'm flattered. Glad you enjoyed the verse- not so sure about more, this type of poem comes to me every now and again. I'm more likely to write some angsty stuff on the regular- any way thanks.

    j'hiah. respect. Long time no see/hear in here. I appreciate your stopping on this.

    JAH Love always.
     
  8. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes spiritual, etheral, those are definatley the words that come to mind with this peice...........I get a sense of completness for some reason........Nice read
     
  9. YeshuJah

    YeshuJah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Natasha & Sherykah, thank you both for reading the verse. I am glad you thought it good enough to respond.

    JAH Bless.
     
  10. Poetic Justice

    Poetic Justice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Goodness,
    I just read this piece for the first time, and i am i awe of your beauty with the stream, racing, an overflow
     
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