Black Poetry : Out of the blue....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Rico, Jul 3, 2003.

  1. Rico

    Rico Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She broke my heart and acted like we had nothing
    She was so cold to me
    I was like what the hell is going on…she just left me!

    I am like you coming to me now....

    After you gave me the cold shoulder had a grown man crying falling to his knees loosing sleep-getting Weak...thinner by the hour...you wanna come to me now

    And talk about what you need and what you don’t have...you the one turned around and walked out on what was good..for some nig*** out in da’ hood

    Talking about I will get a better job this will be the last time I promise...my credit cards at their limit..bank calling...repo man coming

    Can you please?

    But where were you when I was on my knees crying at all hours wondering what the hell happened where did I go wrong...not understanding this thing called love at all...
    Pain tearing at my chest feeling like I was going to go into cardiac arrest...

    And now you want to call me out of the blue...
    :eek:
     
  2. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Rico,

    Very captivating read. Remain cautious.

    My best to you!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh i've gone through this sooooooooo many times!!! have you been readin' my journal?lol....very nice read...
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love run on paths of twisted roads
    sometime love can be cold
    yet love is grand sweet and warm
    a journey of never understanding

    indeed i feel u here
    where was da love
    how did it get away
    what was wrong
    da sad song many sing
    then out of blue da phone ring

    how can it be
    was it truely love for thee
    or a myth of a notion
    can one feel my emotions
    well da answer is within

    from da hurt & pain
    the whispers of one's name
    then same me not

    tyte scribe poet !!
     
  5. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Don't focus all your hatred towards the past...
    Stuff changes and our hearts harden fast
    As your friend , the person in which you confide
    Please don't fall back on her side
    She has proven time and time again she's not worthy
    All she does is take and act realy flirty
    I'ts kinda funny though how she just decided to call
    Like, your almost over her and now this hits you like a wall
    But I'm just sittin back to see what you do..
    I told you karma gets back everyone...and when it does...they're through


    Good flow Rico...Hang in there :heart:
     
  6. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow, Rico the pain you articulate is truly felt, it's amazing how we never miss our water until the well runs dry and then here it comes--------------calling out of the blue! Feeling u foreal on this one!
     
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    this flow is pouring...
    feelin the emotion and
    the pain from within...let it go ..
    let it flow...you are special
    she messed up on a good thing
    and now trying to play a new game
    you been there and you not the same
    live and learn
    Peace
     
  8. bahati

    bahati Active Member MEMBER

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    i love this. now let me tell ya as a girl who is guilty of having done the same sh** to her ex-fiance: when she finally realizes what, who she has lost she'll beat herself up over it, for being so stupid, for leaving such a great person just to mess around. don't look back, stay focused on your future. you'll be happy again. lots of love and peace
     
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    Love hurts,
    but don't hardened your hurt,
    for be it true awaits,
    before it's threshold incounters of
    imitation, so prepare your heart and stride.;)
     
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    RICO!!!!!!!!:grouphug: :grouphug:

    I'm lovin this. Let her know! I agree wit bahati tho too. This GIRL is beating herself up now because she realizes that she fu**ed up! Don't fall into the trap. Press on and wit a smile.....Alize :heart:'s you! LOL

    Keep flowin!
     
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