Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GA_Sunshyne, Jul 13, 2001.
...out of syght out of my mind.
YES MY SUNNY BOO!
I'M MISSING U TOO
COZ AS THE LIGHTS
DEM WE SLOW DANCE IN THOUGHTZ
FEELING DA TOUCH AND TASTING THE RIPPLE
OF YA LIPS AS U BITE DOWN ON MINES
**** I'M GOING OUT OF MY MIND
AS WE TAKE FLIGHT NIGHT AFTER NIGHT
IMBEDDED IN SWEET CARESSES
YO WHISPER WAS FOOD TO MY SOUL
AND MY DEAR SUN~~~FOREVER I'LL HOLD
CLOSE TO MY HEART TIL MY RETURN
YA NOT ALONE.........................................!
This was a heartfelt piece and reminded me that i have those that I miss terribly and when they aren't here--it seemslike neither am I--well done--Amun-Ra
$$RICHNE$$. bbbbboy! you betta stop it! you do
know that planes leave GA going to IL... erryday, ryght?
Ra. i am humbled by your reply... as always. thank
you for the read.
well, ummm, let's just say that it is well written, deeply scribed and...
just plain ole' tightly scribed :rolling:
keep em coming scribe....
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ok ok ok
you know i'm your groupie
you know i'm loving your work
don't cry baby
So'ja right here
So'ja got strong shoulders, back and all that
and a pack of tissues
cause So'ja gonna make it alright
loving your style but i ain't telling you something you don't already know
this is about right...when we in deep, the kissin isn't ALL that's missin! Like the way you think/scribe Miss sunshyne.
THIS IS HOT..TO SAY THE LEAST..HE IS A LUCKY GUY..PERIOD!
D. thank you for the read, my dear! my day
has just been bryghtened considerably!
Soja. (lol) you ain't no groupie! although one
tyme i do remember you tellin' me you are my numba
1 fan! thanks for bein' here to make it alryght!!
Ty. well you know great minds think alike!
thank you for takin' da tyme.... my friend.
G-Man. you are THE sweet-est!! thanks for
stoppin' by and for letting me know you were here.
i was using groupie as to say i am starstruck by your
and GA_ i am your #1
so don't forget about me
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