Quiet Poetry Lounge : OUT OF SIGHT

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Feather, Sep 6, 2011.

  1. Feather

    Feather Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    stumbling
    outstretched arms
    my hands like duck feet
    anxious...

    to feel something familiar
    embracing

    obstructions
    wont hold me back
    im so stubborn

    I'm not afraid to fall

    people push me out their way
    others hold me...tight
    wanting me to stay

    despite our bond
    irresistible cravings
    beckon me on
    to my belonging

    where sight is clear
    and doubts vanish without a trace

    im not afraid of pain...to bleed for my honor
    its worth the wounds
    wet pillows
    and grief

    humility is my friend
    im not too proud
    or easily provoked
    I know who i am
    their insults don't hurt

    I've defined myself which they can't overcome

    though i cant see
    I can feel everything
    the inferno of my heart
    guiding me
    nothing and no one...will put it out


    nostalgic...beating for me
    despite torture
    ferrying wounds so deep
    weathered
    standing strong in victory

    my ignorance drives me
    to keep stumbling

    to know more
    feverish
    in search for the key

    journeying...
    to open my mind

    to truly feel...
    dominate
    own...
    and cherish

    my reality...
     
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    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It begins with You!
    Great arcitectual Flow 4 Sure!
     
  3. Feather

    Feather Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ;) thanx sis Ive read some of your posts too mainly haiku's, I didn't mention but they are appreciated too :).
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    U mastered this with A+ ya pen speaking in tongue flow on sis
     
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