Black Poetry : Out of Sight - Out of Mind

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As the line of self sight
    becomes blurred

    Mind's wonder

    Can virgin spect-eye-cles
    take witness of
    shadowed
    movements
    through
    retrospective
    looking glasses
    raising
    ~ I ~
    brows that
    accept a future
    that isn't outlined in
    the darkness of the past

    CONsidering
    non-existant realities
    that appear to be
    defunct--

    ..........character - less
    ..................emotion - less
    ..........spirit - less
    ..................mind

    -- less

    ~ and

    if vie(you)wed
    at any angle
    these deficiencies
    project
    reflections of ab(sense)
    that need
    a more
    thorough
    exam-I-nation

    ~ but
    what's to study
    if
    ... 'nothing'
    is even there?


    Did self -- d i s a p p e a r ? ?

    Or ... did

    zero visibility
    collect the
    images of
    internal inadequacy

    preventing
    introspection's entrance
    into life's
    observation room



    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    HELLA TYGHT

    MY MOUTH WIDE OPEN IN AMAZEMENT
    U SAID A MOUTH FULL.......SPEAKETH POET!!
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey brotha -- I certainly thank you for reading this!

    :heart: ya'
     
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    had ta click on this title
    ta let ya know
    when you're outta sight
    my mind worries

    nice flow as always N2urSoul

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    now, you know, that this piece is quite nyce, dear poetess. yes, indeed...true talent. i'm lovin' it!
     
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    MoEffective Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OH YES

    I am lovin this peice.
    Soul:
    you always come wit it at a different angle
    that
    makes me see things
    in a brighter light.
    keep flowin......
     
  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Queen D

    Never worry mami ... If I happen to be out of sight
    it's only because I'm out riding on my motorcycle
    allowing the warm summer air to restore my
    thoughts ... but I'm always reading even when I
    don't get the opportunity to drop a piece...

    Thanks for taking notice ...
    Your sustah in poetry!!

    One :heart:
     
  8. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    List~

    Girl I am definitely smiling... you always seem to know
    just what to say (positively speaking, of course) :wink:

    :D

    Thank you for taking the time to read this piece!

    oneluv
     
  9. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mo'Effective

    If you like it, then I "love" it!!
    Glad my pieces allow
    illumination to carress the
    creases of your mind!

    Oneluv. :wink:
     
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    Hey N2!!!

    I am sooooo lovin this peace!!! :cool:
     
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