Black Poetry : Out of Love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Dec 28, 2003.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Out of Love
    >>>>>>>>>

    Out of love
    Woe is me is delusion ~
    Blood clot!
    That's the heart's confusion

    Winning friends,
    Trying to feel some love
    Schmoosing peers
    We'd be better without

    Out of love
    Giving all you're good for
    Mr. Rogers,
    In the neighborhood ya'll

    Oprah Winfrey,
    On the tube enthralls us
    Selling love,
    To the Out of Love Club



    1poetsought ~ copyright 2003
     
  2. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    honored am I to be the first to give love on this fab piece...u neva let a sista down when you flow my brotha
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love this drop
    indeed yo never lets us down wit the flows....
    much love to ya ...Angel
     
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    Birddgurl2 Member MEMBER

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    that was a very well put together poem my brotha
    keep up the loving and powerful thoughts
    and drop them
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed brutha u mastered it once again
    love dis
     
  6. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice one...poet..like a game show..good one here..feeling your flow
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
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