Black Poetry : out of body

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, Feb 28, 2001.

  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ~one mo~ :D



    Last night I opened my eyes
    to face the seamless blackness
    so deep I questioned whether my
    brain had given the command
    to raise my hand...
    as I lay there, surrounded by
    silence...I felt the brush of
    your skin against mine
    but how could that be? Your
    body was miles away from me...

    sensations persisted and I
    didn't resist it

    butterfly kisses on my lashes

    paralyzed my reactions

    deep
    electrifying
    contractions

    as quickly as you'd come
    you'd gone

    slipping away into the dawn


    Alyce, 2000
     
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    aaahhhh ... so soothing Alyce

    thank you

    :)
     
  3. henryx40

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    out of body....into mind

    last night i closed my eyes
    to face your beauty
    i took your hand in mine
    i surrounded you in love
    and touched your skin with mine

    for even miles away
    i touched you in my dreams

    we connect in mental streams
    of calling card memories

    sensations of last week's
    honey well in navel valleys
    and my touching your life cord
    in tongues
    extracting
    honey sweetest

    last year's
    butterfly kisses on your lashes
    and the tingle of wings
    as they flutter down your body
    to settle in hidden places

    once again
    paralyzed my reactions

    rippling deep
    electrifying
    contractions
    causing a
    chain reaction
    miles away
    in my mind

    as quickly as we'd cum
    you'd gone

    slipping away into the dawn


    ~your scribe bring it Alyce :)~
     
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    Refreshing my sister in poetry.
    henryx40 seems to agree!
     
  5. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hidden Thoughts

    There is a sublte, almost hidden eroticism in this piece--I think we can agree on that--subtle--but it has sparks that betray it as I'sure you meant to do--Ra :devil:
     
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    sraheem2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    .. this is one of my absolute favorite "Alycian" verses. Someone once coined that term for all things "Alyce". This, is just one of the many examples of what it must be like... inside your mind.

    Thank you for the view.

    SR2
     
  7. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    queen,
    i'm glad this one was pulled up.
    no experience like reading your mind.

    nfinite..
     
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    diva08 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that was the best quickie.....
    j/k
    scribe poetess, scribe.

    d
     
  9. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sista alyce.


    mmm hmmmm... :D

    this right heah... this is decadent!
    i'm glad it was brought to my attention! :)

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    it's beautiful how u can make one's feel so free
    loved dis here flow sistah A
     
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