Black Poetry : Our Tyme

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    The first moment we met
    the way u walked acrossed
    the room for that moment
    only u I saw wit a vision
    of love untouched
    my mind be flattered
    to speak
    lips dry as i speak yet
    no word flo
    my heart cuddle inside my soul

    U turn to see behind
    only then i wished
    u saw me standing there

    u flashed the most beautiful smile:D
    as i captured it in my wildest dream
    and u turn and walked away

    leaving me undone
    not knowing if
    and wondering
    but in my mind :confused: &heart:heart:
    I knew it was our tyme
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Cindy

    our tyme in the night hour
    i be standing with roses & lilliyflowers:heart: :kiss:
    thankz Chick for da read...............;)
     
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    epiphany Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwwww, $RICH$

    You just keep gettin betta with tyme......this is a sooo, sooooo sweet poem....gives me little touchies...
    :luv:


    Epiphany :heart: :)
     
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    Epip

    that was cute ya giving me the luv bug taps:heart:
    so i toss a smack at up!puckle up....:kiss: :love: :kiss:
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yep, it's yall's time...
    the dun of poetry will preside at the wedding :wink:

    nice written,
    jh.
     
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    I hear da bells ringing

    thankz bru.......out on a mission of love :toast:
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICHNE$$....


    i'm just wonderin'... are you sayin' it was love
    at first syght??... cause you know i'm into dat
    kinda thang! (LOL) this heah was... Price-less!

    AlwaysLove.
    SunShyne~
     
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    sunshyne

    it's just that love works in mysterious wayz
    it was our tyme...................:love:
     
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    Butterflies

    ...>floats in from outside>

    Nice poem, very romantic and endearing.
    You have captured that singular moment of forgetfulness
    when we behold a vision that captures our mind, heart, and soul.

    "butterflies"
    What a wonderful feeling.

    Enjoyed the poem very much.
    However I was thrown by the wording here: "walked acrossed
    the room for that moment"
    and
    "my mind be flattered
    to speak"
    But other than that, excellent!

    Thanks for the inspiration.

    <floats out<...
     
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    Rich

    "only then I wished you saw me standing there'..so bittersweet...
    if only our dreams could come true..but then maybe they do for some of us...
    as you travel on your path of love, the pieces get sweeter and sweeter...

    K
     
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