Quiet Poetry Lounge : Our Sweet Journey

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, May 6, 2003.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Quietly we journey off
    to a secret humble place
    we face the rapture of bliss
    in my arms i lay a kiss
    romantic journey
    to the center cave
    feelings all we crave
    us together as one
    so quiet having fun

    in the stillness
    we captured the glow
    in silent a romantic flow
    3 candles lit up our night
    set off a mood just right
    we dance in our zone
    slow a soft sound moan
    a whisper heard
    tyme to get it on
    my desires was high
    in a quiet destiny of bliss
    where now baby just us
    to twist and feel da essence
    my heart calls for u again

    i'm love this ............u finish dis !:heart: :love: :heart: :kiss:
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that was beautiful I'm anticipating the finishing of this poem by other poets. :) maybe I might drop a line or two, well maybe. peace and blessins brutha keep flowin :)
     
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    Take the journey of love as prescribed by Doctor Feelgood himself.

    1poetsought ~
     
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    like a sizzle of compassion
    lips 2 lips we continue
    reclining back
    no soundz made
    just love
    filled in a romantic
    bliss i enter ya
    tresures where a
    sweet embrace is
    captured
    our quiet moment
    is an essence of us
    together under da starz
    da glow of candles
    the burning desires
    we now hold closer

    let us dance again & again
    until the next line begin
     
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    indeed 1poet man da journey is hot !
    Thankz
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    As i taketh u to
    a masterful journey
    to a love so true
    a desired passion
    of me & u
    as u take flyte upon me
    where we glaze into starz
    the moon gliss of our soul
    and in togetherness
    we blissfully hold
    as we dance in a romance
    again & again ............smiling
     
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    like music to my soul. that was beautiful.@rich and cindy
     
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    Thankz purple the journey just started
     
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    In my arms
    i so hold u close
    taken u upon da
    journey ya heart
    feel and caress
    ya body in thrills
    let my love spill.
     
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    and let your love spill on me
    Nevar!!!!!!!!!!:kiss1:
     
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