Black Poetry : OUR Song

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticlyspeakin, May 6, 2003.

  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Come here, close enough, so I can hear your heart pound
    Lets make music, I wanna hear you scream the lyrics
    I'm going to touch right here, so don't jump
    Just exhale and relax, let me work your strings

    I'm going to kiss here, close your eyes
    Visualize...
    Let me take you to heaven
    Im going to lick right here and make a trail that will become my monument
    I know this tickles, dance to this music we're making
    As I move my hands to the beat, let me hear you sing the words
    I want to feel your vibration

    As i open you up, grab my hand, sometimes pain can be pleasure
    Tell me if i go to fast or move too slow, I'll move to your demand
    I feel the heat and taste the sweat
    Keep coming in my direction, dont hold back
    Do you feel that wave of pleasure coming over you?
    Cuz I do

    Once your ocean washes to shore and your emotions wash up
    Ill return to my resting place

    Smell it, feel it, hear it...
    That was a beautiful song.
     
  2. Royal_T

    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow! Unbelievably beautiful. Thank You for your scribe.
     
  3. cypher

    cypher Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that was a beautiful song......lovin it...
     
  4. PurpleMoons

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    no need to say more. cypher and royalt hit it right. loved it
     
  5. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    pretty poem........i agree w/the others.........much love :)
     
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