Black Poetry : OUR SONG~OUR LOVE

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Ms_MochaB, Jan 14, 2006.

  1. Ms_MochaB

    Ms_MochaB Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOOKING AT YOU AS YOU EXPRESS TO ME, WHAT TOOK YOU SO LONG
    TO BE AT EASE, IN MY PRESENCE WANTING TO SAY "I DO"
    OUT IN PUBLIC ACTIONS SCREAMING "DO I KNOW YOU?"

    BUT I TOLD YOU BEFORE, NOW WOULD BE A GOOD TIME TO WALK AWAY
    INSTEAD YOU REPLIED ... EVEN BETTER IF I STAYED
    WHEN I LOOK AT YOU, MY SMILE RETURNS AS MY HEART YEARNS TO
    BE WITH YOU FOR NOW AND FOREVER ...

    YOU ARE TO ME NOW, WHAT WE SHOULD HAVE BEEN YEARS AGO
    BUT DESTINY WOULDN'T ALLOW IT TO BE SO ...
    ALLOWED TO SEPERATE IN ORDER TO BUILD
    INDIVIDUAL LIKES AND DISLIKES AS PART OF THE DEAL:

    I SING AND YOU PLAY ... WRITTEN WORDS SHARED FROM DAY TO DAY
    HARMONIZING SOUNDS THAT ONCE MADE NO SENSE
    NOW A BEAUTIFUL SONG SHARED THROUGH LOVE THAT WAS MEANT

    YOU ARE MY MELODY, THE VAMP THAT I LOVE TO HUM
    YOU ARE THE CHORUS OF A SONG WITH NOTHING BUT THE BEAT OF A DRUM
    YOU ARE THE CRECENDO OF MY VOICE WHEN I SPEAK
    YOU ARE THE TEMPO USED TO KEEP OUR LOVE IN SYNC

    BUT TOGETHER WE ARE A MEDLEY, A TRUE MIXTURE OF WHAT
    WE WILL SOON BE....

    ~I LOVE YOU BENJAMIN~
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awww, that was beautiful, finally merging 2 people that were just meant to be.
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sweet and endearing! good poem
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was beautiful
    This was really was nice
    I love your flow Poet
    Nice drop
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    O' my sista this leap off the page
    and into my heart what a sweet
    release and beautiful scribe so deep
    much luv sis..................................
     
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    ibrahim Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww
     
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    Ms_MochaB Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all!!!!
     
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    Ms_MochaB Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all!!!! As u have guessed ... I'm in L-O-V-E ... for real
     
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    alright now Mz. Mocha flow on poet.:kiss1:
     
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