Black Poetry : Our Secret Place

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by soblessed, Dec 24, 2005.

  1. soblessed

    soblessed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Another sleepless night
    Visions of your face dance through mind
    Longinging to hold you in my arms
    Tell you I love you once more
    To hear your sweet voice once again
    My precious little girl
    I cannot tell you why your father is so cruel
    Ripped away from you
    A piece of my heart was also wiped away
    Seeing you in my dreams, brings me a moment of joy
    Then I awake and you are gone
    But my dreams
    My dreams no one can take that away
    That's our secret place
    A place where we can go
    Where we can be together again
    A place where I can hold you
    A place where I can tell you I love you
    My sweet little girl
    I am always thinking of you
    I hope you think of me too
    I will never forget you
    I pray you won't forget me
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Unconditional love...never ever dies, One day, your joy will return to you...God works in mysterious ways.
    Your daughter hears and feels your every word...beautiful piece poet.
     
  3. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was very touching flow on poet.
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love for you your daughter PRICELESS
    He cant take that away from you
    Much Love Sister missed ya
    I Pray!!!
     
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    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sister ....so blessed...



    aww...


    this broke my heart...
    it was a heartfeld Poem..



    I dont know what this is ...
    but i feel that i need to speak to you...
    is what god is telling to my heart..
    and i dont care what people might say

    the light came in to this world...
    and it is also shining for you....

    jezus didnt came in the world for certain people ...
    for all of us..



    i dont have a computer at home ..
    cause other wise we could chat more...



    ok ....


    i have seen a lot of pain ..
    in youre eyes...(i have seen it at youre pic at the fam album its a beautifull pic tough.)


    there are a lot of things going in youre life right now...
    to much....
    and you can not fix it all by youre self and all at ones..
    there are a lot of emotions going on in youre heart
    and its making you tired i can see that...

    and you dont know where to begin at times....

    well ...


    i do know where to begin...

    to tell you...



    that Jezus is about love and forgiveness and light..
    and renieuwing....and peace...

    now i dont know what happend to the 2 of you that caust you to not see youre daughter....

    but i know you dont have to suffer that way and carry this deep grieve in youre heart....(wich i can understand cause it is about youre daughter)
    (i know that you know that you are blessed sister its not about that)






    THAT....that evil force needs to :shutup: to tell you stoopid....guilt things
    in :heart:JEZUS :heart:NAME.....







    invite him in youre heart...(if you not have done this but you told me you know him)

    You know who i am talking about ...
    that Light that came into this world...


    ask him to come...
    in youre heart ...and take the the deep wound away...
    and that he may fill you with his love..

    ask him and telll him....
    about youre situation ...
    and that you give him full power and control ..
    to take care of this situation..
    and full trust in him that he will make it alright..
    he knows what is best for you...
    ask him to do that ..
    what you can not do
    that where it is out of youre hands..
    he can do it..
    he can do the work..

    And believe he can do it...

    Ask him...
    to let go ...
    of that what you have to let go..


    As him ...

    wich is verry verry inportent...

    to forgive you...
    for what you have done wrong (even if you have the feeling you have done nothing wrong ,we always make mistakes for we are not perfect we are human)

    after this ...
    believe that he forgives you.....


    BUT.....

    you have to forgive this man he is not perfect..
    he was probebly as much as hopeless as you to..




    ..

    and the ones that caused you much grieve,...
    to...


    and pray for them to...


    if you are on that level or to say in that walk....

    sister that you can move mountains....



    I know i sis..........:eek: it aint easy .............(you will never forget ,but you have to forgive.....its there in the prayer our father who is in heaven),i ,ve been there ,you dont know me and what i have went trough ,and still at this day at times ..i experiance cutting deep painfullthings .......but i learn to forgive and pray for them .......and i hope i stay this way.,.....other wise i would have turned into this big revence monster :bawling: ...................so intead of that i drop tears ......and let everything for god)


    i know its a proces...


    but you have to start doing it..

    so the healing proces of god can start in both of youre hearts....


    of all of the 3 of you .....



    we are all connected to eachother...



    and i feel youre pain to....


    and those of manny ...

    ones ...



    and its my job ...


    and duty....

    to tell you the "'good message"'


    other wise i am a liar....


    when i say....




    i love my brothers and sisters ...:kiss1:
    and i love destee,s place and support them....






    i love you sis......



    Do You go to a community around youre aria where they preach the word the gospel?


    i will keep continue to pray for you...

    and all here....



    i will pray that big big BIG angels will seround you...

    and everyone who is hurt in this ..

    asppecialy youre daughter....
    who feels it to..

    i know....... i work with children...



    and i have experianced it as a child how it feels to be riped from both of youre parrents...



    I will pray and i believe that .....

    that you will be reunited again...(i dont know when)

    but you have to believe in it to..

    in gods power Mightynes.....



    Would anything be inpossible to him....for him..?


    let gods will be done....

    and everything will fall on his place in time...

    everything has his time and seasons...




    and sis make shure ...
    you still love the ones who are with you know..

    i see you have 3 beautifull sons and a husband ....
    and they need youre honest love to.....










    so that is what i wanted to say...:eek:





    i love you sis.....:eek:



    youre going to be alright:eek: ...




    just put God ...and his son the lord Jezus first in youre life...:heart:




    big hug and zibberr:heart:





    Folow the light....:eek:
     
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    This sure did tug at my heart strings. A daughter knows how her mother feels, the ties are just that strong. I felt this poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the bond of hearts will forever be
    feeling all this piece as my mind
    go back to moments and time
     
  8. krazelyricks

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    This was so sad. I was feeling this though. Dreams CAN'T be taken away. It's the dreams that keep us away from reality. Nice flow. Flow on poet.
     
  9. soblessed

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    Ty quenntswana and yes Unconditional love...never ever dies
    Ty you nevar and Tantrum
    Ty Auroraflower
    Ty Watz it tugs at my heart strings everyday
    Ty Rich
    And Ty krazelyricks and Dreams CAN'T be taken away.........
     
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