Black Poetry : Our Night

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Last night was our night
    Loving me in the deepest passion
    Flowing in heavens door
    Dayum
    You make me
    Release all that is me
    Breakin wild in the night heat
    Inside my body here you go
    Up and down…..
    Round and round
    Between the sheets we went for a ride…
    Sliding slowly
    Holding me softly
    Like and Angel in the night….

    Molding my being
    Slowly we engaged
    In a fairytale….

    Last night was our night
    Passion rang the air
    As we went all the way
    Sharing a dream folding
    Into one no longer two…
    Here we go all over again
    Riding the clouds
    Touchin the stars
    As the moon and sun dance…
    Last night was our night….

    Ok ok let me slow it down…. :spinstar:

    Last night he took me in his arms an
    Loved me like a lady with fire in our eyes
    As our love song played in the wind of love…

    Last night…
    I release my soul
    To become whole with his
    Last night…

    Feeling a poetic vibe
    We made love…
    Feelin the essence
    Took us in a bliss
    As we kiss….
    Last night….
    Listen to the wind charms…
    We made them
    As the lover calls
    Bodies yearn
    In the midnight magic of us

    Last night
    :heart: ............. was
    :blush: .................. our
    :love: .........................night
     
  2. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "Last night while makin' love to you I saw the sun the sun the moon the moon the mountains and the rivers I saw heaven when I made sweet love to yoooou.":lol:I love this piece so passionate:wave:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Liked the way you changed the tempo in this erotic piece, nicely laid.
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    something bout last night !!!
    whewwwwwwww!!!
    as we river the moment
    under the starz of sparkle
    and into the moons glow
    lastnight
    we felt the essence of love
    making compassionate love
    lastnight
    as the sky open
    and our hearts touched
    we became one floating
    on the tropic vision of
    last night
    as we dance in romance
    sheet grippin
    under cover dippin
    letting souls free
    inside a love tenderly
    as the orbs of ya body
    release on me
    lastnight
    ummmmmm!
    something bout lastnight
    dis was awesome tyteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  5. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There's something about :love: that has no begining, and has no end .
    you laided this out quite well...it made my heart start jumping :spin:
    thinks for sharing this with us.
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SensualReality, watzinaname thanks for the support on this thread

    $$RICH$$
    Last night we let the love flow
    And the passion invade
    As our night was
    Something out of the
    Fairytale heaven
    Essence of you
    Of me
    Linger in the air as we
    Move
    higher
    higher
    dance in a sweet
    romance
    tenderly folding and
    playing…
    last night….
    Last night was
    our night
    LOVED YA FLOW IN
    Wheeeew...tight

    queentswana...indeed it is thanks for the love sis

    Peace
    Angel
     
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