Quiet Poetry Lounge : "OUR NEW BEGINNING"

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    As da glisting moon shine so bright
    starz blossom glaze deep in da night
    love passion peak as our souls unite
    making musical rapture til morning light

    I'm feeling ya motion in embrace
    caressin ya beauty my heart now trace
    sensual eyez speak my finger line ya face
    our spirits entewined in a efforting grace

    U become my brilliant bubbling brown sugar
    we glide above into a forever love endlessly
    touching my sensitive as i touch yo secrecy
    making a moment to cherish magnificently
    ur now beloved my hearts greatest eternity

    A soft rose i pose in my translucent hand
    intimately new waves are born from our stand
    through new experiences our bodies land
    da sparkles of love beyond lust we command
    destiny is our fate i can't hide or pretend

    I want u deeply within my Rapture of extreme
    i want to circle ya milkyway to taste da cream
    i want to gallop in ya essence like a wreckage fein
    and dance in ya hot sassy sexuality steam
    hard drive u from behind til ya moans flip to screams

    Reminiscing of our body quarrel in hip dippin
    making u wiggle buck and jiggle from da flippin
    foreplay from my tongue swishing and sippin
    as i invade ya wet quiet paradise to submission
    i knew it was nasty true love ​


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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Much to say on this one.... Loved the alliteration, rhyme scheme, and rhythm. And although it started out sweetly, you laced that sensuality in deeply toward the end. Enjoyed this flow Rich.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz watz........the beginning bliss in true love bring sexy
    hot rapture to it best .
     
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    can it really be our new beginning
    love like this feel like lottery a big winning

    the stars pointed to where true love may bring
    to the one who will make my heart sing

    it up to you if i can continue on this hot mix rich
    nice flow this passionate write so sick. sick a good thing.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    continue
    break it down
    from dis love u found
    let ya heart speak
    from da beginning tree
    sing da song u lone
    let ya passion roam
    to win is a lottery pick
    right numbers indeed this it
    com-bo-na-tion twist
    for da beginning happiness
    continue yes miss
    so i feel da glist of this wave.
     
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    to richy rich$$$$$$.....

    can it really be our new beginning
    love like this feel like the lottery a big winning

    the stars pointed to me where true love may bring
    to the one who will make my heart sing

    your so thoughtful to call me your bubbling brown suga
    hate to be ghetto but your my nugga

    for life because you bring out the beast in me
    your poetic wordz just sets me free

    let embrace this wave of love that seems to flo
    through
    has me yearning, burning to get next to you
    baby i dont care who knows i'll be your fool
    use me as a neccessary tool
    its cool
    send me to school

    to learn the true meaning of what it feels
    to be beside a true king that will kneel

    before his queen
    dont know how to be mean

    cant wait to be with you for an eternity
    i'm telling ya this is how it gotta be
    you complete me

    lets have a toast to

    Our New Beginning!!!!!!!!!!:wine:
     
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    As i wave in pleasure:wave:
    to toast a cheer my dear:toast:
    warmth of love covers me
    i'll swim the ocean cross da sea:swim:
    knowing a loyal heart awaits me :heart:

    What i feel is so real
    i wanna give my passionate thrill
    caress and comfort any chillz
    i am love's greatest big deal :hearts4:
    it's a rapture my body lone
    and the notes of her visional song
    da rapid touch her secret moan

    i wanna taste her essence
    i wanna feel her soul
    i wanna feast from her bliss
    and senualness twist
    ummm how i wish and wish
    cheers to dis ...................:toast: :toast:
     
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    lets toast let's forever chill
    you've giving me such a thrill

    the pleasure was all mine
    being with you just somehow i lose the track of time

    cause when i with you , you bring a smile on my face
    yes go ahead and taste my esscence

    taste me and i'll taste you back
    thanks for taking up my slack

    its so nice that you would do just about anything
    come bring

    me all of you
    not part of you

    and lets embrace this joy of

    Our New Beginning!!!!!!!!!!!!:couple: :flirt: :luvu:
     
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    My my my
    i wanna ride ya tide
    feel the depth u pose inside
    make massive steamy touchies
    have u under my love clutchies

    now we stablized a feelin
    and know our desires thrillin
    and the notions of blissin
    through glist of kissin
    nothing left is really missin

    friendship is made
    transistion to the next stage
    where loyality & trust is engage
    in a new beginning rage
    embracing the future......Rapidly
     
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    to rich

    you wanna ride my tide
    like how you wanna go inside

    my mind, body and soul
    let this new beginning take it toll

    cause i want you feel the same way i do
    i know the love between us is true
    that why i want you

    to lets continue to toast to our

    New Beginning:kiss2:
     
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