Black Poetry : Our Love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Roxanne, Again, Dec 23, 2003.

  1. Roxanne, Again

    Roxanne, Again Guest

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    If I want
    What you want
    Then we both can have our way
    Imagine our sway
    As the breeze
    Caressing the leaves of palm trees
    Tickling the roots or our limbs
    We don't have to pretend
    For our reality
    Is the placement of desire within our soul
    We have
    What others have died for
    We have
    What others have cried out to just behold
    This be our bliss
    Black Love
    It's not enough to be contained in words
    We maintain
    In the verb of how we behave
    Our ways
    Above the Heavens and the Earth
    Beneath the sea
    Surpassing the very mystery
    Of the stars in the sky
    If I had to descibe
    Your Black eye
    Looking in my Black eye
    I could only attempt to try and equate
    Black Love
    As the greatest gift of all
    The Creator's creation
    I believe
    He chose to be amazed by this
    Black Love bliss
    The reason why
    God rested on the seventh day
    If I want
    What you want
    Our Black Love.....
    Then we both can have our way
     
  2. cuvriefloesta

    cuvriefloesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow...I am through writing that was great :spinstar:

    I loved the line that read "For our reality
    Is the placement of desire within our soul
    "
    It was beautiful
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  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very very very sweet scribe i love it to the max
    keep flowin like dis and take my heart ....wow!!!
     
  4. Mawelulu1Luv

    Mawelulu1Luv Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    An Adoring Celebration of Love Divine

    Tasty Delicious

    Write On!
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice very nice flow here...
     
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