Black Poetry : our love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by wildflower7, Nov 27, 2002.

  1. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i still day dream of having you in my arms
    all tangled in the sheets of our bed
    making movies in the mirrors
    i still get butterflies
    you still make me smile
    and cry
    and laugh
    and angry
    and happy
    and secure
    and i don't think i could stop feeling this consuming
    passion for you because it dwells in a place
    inside me
    in the core of my being
    right beneath the place where God has stored His peace
    i love you so much
    don't ever stop loving me.
     
  2. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Express..
    Confess..
    So very nice.
     
  3. Ladysoul

    Ladysoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this a lot. you have put so many feelings in less than 20 lines. great work!
     
  4. luvtoluv

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    AAAHHHH...........
    Sounds like love to me.
    Loved It!
     
  5. MissPoetik

    MissPoetik Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice... i can relate.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    say it gurl say it loud !!!
    work dem keyz
     
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    DIIMOND Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can really relate to this flow of love.... Reminds me of a love so sweet I once knew.... Go head wit' yo bad ***
     
  8. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm glad y'all enjoyed... :spinstar:
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    AS ALWAYS THAT WAS BEATIFUL WILDFLOWER...
    KEEP EM COMIN' SWEETIE
     
  10. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very lovely piece
     
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