Quiet Poetry Lounge : OUR LITTLE SECRET of a woman

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    THE SECRET OF A WOMAN.......MENTAL MIND.......
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    It's like day to day
    from hour to hour
    a love grow inside
    like a rose flower
    so soft sweet gentle
    and mild have a woman
    in smiles , alone the way
    nine months just the two
    the woman & one inside u
    sharing so much all the time
    til the day da lights shine

    given hiccups
    recieving heartburns
    at every beat of a heart
    the baby hear u talk & yearn
    caressing , rubbing , comforting
    lil kicks & push of hand & feet
    letting u know one not sleep

    feed me
    feed me

    as they get closer
    building a bond
    u feed them inner wisdom
    for long nine months they
    by yo side through good times
    and the bad surely the best friend
    to have then come the pain
    not to hurt but from the past
    body work
    wiggling , pushing sweatin too
    one mo time on two......pop!
    out a little cry bring tears to
    a mother's eye
    tic toc time to name the one
    who know u well from where
    growth dewell
    in a woman mind she feel
    the worlds greatest thrill

    when u kick i jump
    when u twist i turn
    when u yearn i feed
    now u out to see
    feel like i lost a part of u
    da soul splite into
    of what made a woman whole

    To say a woman secret keep
    untold a story of treasured gold
    without a woman there be no me
    she was the one gave birth to thee

    so before one bash a woman's heart
    remember where u start inside a woman
    the secret of her heart da beauty of birth

    moma baby daddy maybe !!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh man this was so just no words to fit...
    you have really just out done yourself this time...
    now i have one more to add to my wall...
    you are the RICHNESS
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz sistah Queen blkangel
    a woman's love is thou child
    which whom she bare...........

    Olak......indeed
    the bond
    one's love
    da birth
    de pain
    the arms
    the heart
    of a mother
    to
    a
    child
    the greatest gift of all
    Thankz sistah Queen
     
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    much love and respect to you

    to carry the seed
    to feel it grow
    it is blessing
    from above
    it is gift
    to bear a child
    that comes from the seed
    created by love
    Peace
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    after this..no thank you needed..thank you...
    this was so beautiful :thanks:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes bluewater the seed that grow within
    is the gift of GOD'S hand and from the
    seed is life a treasure of a woman her child
    I honor all mothers for without them their be
    no us ......

    sistah BlkAngel .......i humblely say thankz
    mother's like yaself is the gift to men
    one whom bare the child and enhance such
    pain carry nine months is alwayz honored
    the love of a mother & child is beautiful

    may the mother's of love be bless forever
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you for honoring us...
    your a kind soul
    old soul a
    wise soul
    within you have alot of knowledge i seek..
    know that i love this poem and i love your work
    and i will always read you... :grouphug: love ya
     
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    :bowdown: No words to describe how tight this was. Keep up the good work! :toast:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    again thanks sistah blkangel

    Hiclass female....thank u so much in my mental the emotion was running and the reality of a woman's pain
     
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    when she cry inside out
    the emotions is felt deep
    within da soul from her
    lasting pass and pain
    facing new light no ashame
    but lable as blame a woman
    secret not shared but spoken
    from the mental mind
    of expression and deed
    her glory is the seed
    her pain is the one whom plant
    but yet eyes open wit grace
    a woman is our sistah
    she is the Queen
    a Mother of heart
    someone child
    i honor all women
    young & old
    as i keep searching the
    untold as it unfold
    peace my lady
     
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