Black Poetry : our life dedicated to:my mommy RIP

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  1. guttapoetfromny

    guttapoetfromny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    “ OUR LIFE”


    I hate that you hurt so badly,
    I cry because you hurt so badly,
    I hurt because you hurt so badly,
    I ache when you ache
    I sleep when you sleep
    I breath when you breath
    I smile because you smile,
    I pray with you
    I call on his name with you
    I believe with you

    I ache when you ache
    I sleep when you sleep
    I breath when you breath
    But,
    if you die then I die
    For you are the reason why I live
    You are my strength,
    My heart,
    The air that I breath,
    you are a necessity without you there is no me.

    Dedicated to: my mommy
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you, for sharing such a beautiful tribute to mommy.
     
  3. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I do know and understand your feelings. thanks for sharing them
     
  4. guttapoetfromny

    guttapoetfromny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for ur reply, i'm glad to know yall understand :hearts2:
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is beautiful and touching, poet. Diggin it.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was very heartfelt, and I have known these feelings. I also know that a mother's love lives on in us forever. This was a wonderful tribute.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awesome tribute to mommy very touching thanks for sharing a part of you with us.....Angel
     
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    Wiping a Tear

    The connection is unexplainable so much that you could not even conceive breathing but you get through and the sun will shine again. I learned to be grateful for times shared with loved ones... Make memories while you can life is short ... If nobody told you they loved you today let me fill in... I LOVE U 4 this piece... thanks
     
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    MANASIAC Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The Flow was Gravy
    Maybe these purported vets can learn something from you youngsta
    your poetry was free, with continutity, and it was not hazy

    Nice Poem Madame and Welcome to the Site
     
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