Black Poetry : Our Last Kiss.......And its over....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LURK, Dec 23, 2003.

  1. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I told myself i wouldn't cry....yeah..right...

    As we look at tha hourglass-
    thinkin' that our time done past.....
    this love didn't last..
    i tried a million years over..
    cried a million tears over...but now we pass......
    You exposed ya true feelin's and i see where this is goin'.....
    No where FAST....and girl,my hearts done broken...
    i gave this my all.....i gave this my love from tha start of it...
    i'm tired now...STRESSED...even more,i'm broken hearted kid.....
    so now for your soap opera kris,this gon' be tha last part of it..
    say your "hi's" and "goodbyes" - while i stick to my "why's"....
    its still hard on me trying to figure out all tha lies...
    now its a sad Christmas..... :bawling: Cant believe you don't miss this...
    even if you said you really loved me i wouldnt wanna stick with this...
    see we we're Bonnie and Clyde......but this rugged love just......Calmly died....
    i think of all tha times we shared ~try~plannin' out ya future...
    with someone who didn't care~whut ~this crayzie world could do to ya....

    that aint real....that aint romance...
    i cant feel....i have no chance....

    So whuts gon'be done from here.....??...
    i wanna see my angel love.......she calms my fear...
    it'll be bad for her if she sees us like this...
    plus it'll be worst for me,hold back your kiss......
    no---dont grab my wrist.....
    C'mon ,why you wanna do this..??.....
    2 dayz ago you was sayin' how you could give 2 shyyyts'..!!..??.....
    if we went our seperate wayz so dont do me like this...
    I'm a ~man with pride..~not a ~god [email protected] lie....
    how could you expect me to look into ya eyes after this.....?????
    Im hurt....i cant speak...gimme a minute...
    i need to think,...i need to breathe.... :confused:
    i cant beleive you really dont lov.....
    i cant beleive you really dont love m......
    i can't .....brea....the..i....uh..
    i'm Lost 4 Wordz.....back at it again...
    tha depressions rushin' in...hope i dont become anotha manic again...
    you spoke your peace..i heard ya heart....i know now whut to do.....
    HERES YA LAST KISS.....WE PART......BUT ALL I EVER DID WAS LOVE YOU.......

    this aint real....this aint romance...
    i cant feel....we never had a chance....
    only if i saw this before, instead of hurtin longer...
    its ok love....L is stronger...............L is stonger....









    never thought anything could be sooo painful....

    [email protected]..2003-2004....

    :flame: ..............Angry,hurt.confused,sad , a lil dead inside...
    can ya feel my pain.....??......this aint no joke to me.....
    i feel for all a those men in my position...tryin ta hold somethin 2getha that was not..
    "for tha kids"- i use ta say....hopefully i saw tha light 4 tha betta.....
     
  2. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm so sorry for your heartbreak. Your poem was very heart felt and I could tell it was straight from your heart. Much love to you and I hope you heal. Broken hearts do not always mend when you want then to, but they do mend. Peace and Love to you.
     
  3. Khasm13

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    dude...
    i feel your pain man...
    it's a fu#ked up feeling when
    someone you care about
    doesn't want you anymore...
    this might sound corny dawg
    but there are plenty of fish out there in the sea
    the next woman that falls for thee
    could be ms. everything...
    take what you have learned from the bad
    and make the next time extra good dawg...
    spoken from a man that has loved and lost
    and loved again...word
    one love
    khasm
     
  4. PositiveMindset

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    Brother Khasm & sister true have taken my words, so no lesson from me.

    But this was truly a soulfelt piece, I really feel where you're workin' out of, brother.

    You'll be i-ight.

    Peace.
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very heartfelt
    i feel the pain in dis as i read...
    sorry my sweet brother...
    but the flow was nice....Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Feelin this, know that there are other souls with similar heartache. Before you can truly move on to the future, you have to come to terms with the past. Truly emotional piece.
     
  7. BaduX

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    :deal: I like this hea
    i can relate to this
    sorry fo yo heartbreak

    GOD BLESS :wink:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deep scribe felt dis inside out
    in due time the light shines
    feeling u here speakth on
     
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