Black Poetry : Our kitchen

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Randee, Jul 16, 2004.

  1. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    small bright galley kitchen
    not made for two
    but last night
    so right
    it was me and you
    never thought i would allow
    someone to enter my domain
    a sacred space i alone occupied
    but since you walked into my life
    i slowed down to experience this ride
    i love this life we are living
    the constant give and take
    the wondering what will happen
    as a life together we make
    this child in my belly
    has taken over both our minds
    while we have given to eachother
    everything possible that the other can hold
    my words spew slower and my rhymes
    don't flow as hard as before
    but, why make up painful lyrics
    when love is constantly
    knocking upon my front door
    my life will never be the same
    and at times i miss the old rush
    but thats when i slow down and realize
    this is everything that makes me flush
    i can't imagine what it would be like
    without your presence near
    without being able to call upon you
    to calm my every fear
    your soothing words and gestures
    calm my spirit and soul
    when my mind plays tricks on me
    and i begin to remember ways of old
    and while we have our share of issues
    things are going to be just fine
    we were meant to be here, like this
    together, forever in our tiny kitchen
    where only the three of us exist.
     
  2. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    All i can say Randee is keep doing ya thing cuz that was a hott poem.
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte drop Randee u laid dis one out
    love it when u bring it this way whewwww!

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  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was a nnice drop
    enjoyed the read...
    come drop it on the mic tonight or any night
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    hope to see you soon.....Angel
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You created a cozy little scene here of a warm family love. Nice read.
     
  6. PurpleMoons

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    Oh yeah! This is
    definately a hot drop!

    Keep on bringing them!
     
  7. SwtT

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    I'm with watz...It felt cozy reading this:) tight poem
     
  8. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This poem brought on a warm easy mellow breezy feeling....keep droppin' em' poet :deal:
     
  9. Chastity

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    I really liked this one....such a nice flow...I could feel the love in the lines...and I didn;t even need to read between them. Keep the pen alive. :spin:
     
  10. gempis

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    So nice to see you again, girl. I have missed your flows, and I dig this one. Peace and blessings.
     
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