Black Poetry : Our kisses are only blown

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by geegee, Mar 4, 2005.

  1. geegee

    geegee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Our kisses are only blown,
    Caught between the sea,
    A vision from a distance,
    I can't see you, and you can't see me.

    I can feel the wind move across my skin,
    An ever soft touch and grace,
    I can feel that you are here,
    But why is there such a space?

    The gap is very wide;
    When will we meet in the middle?
    The love we feel is a trap,
    Why can't it be easy and simple?

    I long for a human embrace,
    I want our love to be shown,
    The feelings we have will meet someday,
    Until then, our kisses are only blown!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was warm and sweet
    had me dreamin nice express
    of love Gee
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Kisses blown that will one day be realized by that special someone. This was a smooth and lovely flow. Looks like your pen is working overtime. Flow on.
     
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    Poetic Justice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    made me feel all warm inside, these days i need that.
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel you baby. Love is a far away thing. Nicely written.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As I read this again, there remains a warm vibe.
     
  7. Nisa

    Nisa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice scribe..felt every word and emotion in this..to the very last drop :terrific:
     
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