Black Poetry : Our First Date (Thriller Version)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by howardtsu, Feb 22, 2006.

  1. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'd be so surprised

    if a girl couldn't disguise

    her "Joy" for me

    and gave me "Almonds" to see

    how much she cares

    about ending my nightmares

    of being alone

    it's Friday the 13th and Freddie Kruger is home

    outside there's a "Howling" and some sounds unknown

    are coming from upstairs

    i pick up the phone

    he says he's already there

    in two seconds i'm gone

    but in the fresh air

    a "Scream" chills me to the bone

    where's my ice cream cone?

    is she alright?

    is she filled with fright?

    could i be her knight

    and rescue her from this "Halloween" night?

    Michael and Jason are keeping up with me despite

    the fact i'm running at top speed

    they're drinking Sprites

    while walking, i think i need

    my soulmate



    love,

    howard
     
  2. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your at your best howard keep them flo's coming.:love:
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I liked this. Keep flowing. I don't know If I said Welcome to Destee.. Welcome home.
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice flow poet
    You know how to deliver
    A mental picture
    Much love poet
     
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