Black Poetry : Our Day Will Come

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  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Conceptualize eternity
    Summarize prophecy
    Fictionalize destiny

    Actualize God,
    In me

    No man knows the time
    the world will end
    No one but God
    can save us,
    friend

    Golden is the rule
    convicting a fool
    busted at school
    blowing HIS
    Cool ~

    A lifetime of pain
    in the famous flames
    our disdain, forever and;
    in the end my explicit grave

    When will it all end?

    Our day will come
    like a thief in the night...
    Jesus delights in assailing our plight


    Darryl Abdu Omari :bowdown:
    a.k.a. 1poetsought ~ thank you, Jesus
     
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    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    I enjoyed the whole, Poet; but that last line really touched me!
     
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    TotalView Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nicely done, precious. Love the focus.

    Spiritually eying the prize!

    thank You, Jesus.

    thank you,1poetsought.

    (smile)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    no doubt that day will come indeed