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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by SensualReality, Jul 19, 2004.

  1. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There is no darkness between you and I
    Baby our love is the light
    We have had some really hard times
    But tonight I can't get you off my mind
    You're everything that even matters to me
    Have my knees knocking weakly
    From your voice a low soft bass
    While I'm sewn into your warm embrace
    You whisper all the things I want to hear
    Carressing my hips and nibbling on my ear
    My heart has no fear that you will dissapear
    When my world was falling apart you were right there from the start
    Picked all my broken pieces and made then shine like golden reeses
    Touch my belly it's slowly swelling
    From the child we made as we laid
    Your love oozed into my awaiting tunnel to mate
    Twisting and a million spots like a funnel cake
    Soakin' wet,slurry,sloppy kisses
    Whispering,mumbling,maybe wishes
    This is ours baby our creation
    This calls for a celebration
    So lets make love again and again
    Til' we have about 8 chirren.



    ~I am not pregant~ :peace:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sweet harmony love twist
    dis was lovely heart felt about two
    da warm gentle touch shinning bright
    nicely expressed

    whewwwww! had me skur'd !
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aaawe, this was so sweet...
    and I love the ending...
    8 chirren...lol

    Lovely peace Sister!
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol thanx Rich and Angelic...I had to put the 8 chirren cuz that's how my granny talk and it went well:wink:
    Rich what was you scared of:lol:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    lol...............somebody making woopy !
    but u handle dat well and laid dis out
    to perfection dis was a goody that takes
    ya on a blissful ride......flow on my sis....
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol thank you and I sure will continue to flow on :jumping:
     
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    Lloyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My buddy

    U really write good!!!
    I like it!!!
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tank you Berry Much
     
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    This is beautiful!
    The realm of
    lovers bliss!

    You laid this so eloquently!
    Loving it!
     
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