Black Poetry : OTHERSIDE OF US ......

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Washing way old ties
    cleansing our souls in da liquid bath
    as the candles burn in depth of morrow
    smelling the lavender cascaded scent
    as we enterlace bodies
    our spirit floats on realism
    from the white wash mental stage
    our mindz river around notions of love

    Here we are in da bubbles of rapture
    splashing knowledge eroticly
    as our souls clash feverishly
    dancin on da moment as we kiss
    blissin as i caress your womanly body
    i can feel your soft handz limbo down
    my back , as we take our time
    in the water of love

    Da flame flicker
    upon ya sway
    rippin da hips , dippin in motion
    slowly rubbin da cares of our blackness
    we become one strong soul
    over turning the savage dat cage our mindz
    sensually we build an suddy profolio
    killin the fields of anger as we remodel
    life's meanings is the otherside of us

    O' behold my beloved
    forth art my loveth
    upon da stat of beings
    washing our sins from tis amerikan shame
    as we resoundingly form our africa
    you are my Queen , my day and morrow
    as we lay on da pillow of destiny
    feeling every curve pushin n' pullin
    deeper / faster we capture da glo of wisdom

    Our creative juices flo
    mending a peaceful journey between us
    i so loveth thee compassionately
    we compromise this candle light bubble bath
    our venture into a new us as woman & man
    out of da mastering care of unjustice
    ruling our own fate , cleansing us baby
    where i now call your name sensually
    under da sexual glist and empowering da minds

    Here we now stand at the temple
    before our old times and labled wayz
    as woman and man , join together in handz
    as we break mold , i feel your spirit touching
    in grasp they no-longer can hold us
    as u moan softly from every stroke
    our freakiness rise .....wait pt.II next.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    One showing the other, that other side, that side that we often shield for fear we'll get hurt. This was sensually sweet, just beautiful. Awaiting part 2...
     
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    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow! There's a part II? Great write Brother Rich! I was on the edge of my seat.
     
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    You Think!:?:


    I was more like on the edge of.....ummmmmmm

    feeling quite RE~Freshed!
    My Mind, Body and Spirit
    Freely Blessed...and Blessing
    by sounds of Lavender, the scent of flickering
    Flames
    of Loves daily showing no shame
    softly whispering his name
    ohhhhhhh..my Spirit taaaaaaamed
    basking quietly in the aftermath
    Victory in this game

    This womanly body all aglow
    squeaky clean ready go
    to the rinse cycle
    come now let's get drenched
    as we continue this process
    of washing off whitey stench


    Anxiously awaiting....Part II:SuN018:


    M.E.
    :hearts2:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes part 2 is next.....when one side step up in a blissful maze it do show the other side watz...Thankz

    Thankz LovesDestiny sho nuff a pt 2 stay tune tonight

    true......now let me drift into ya reply ...hold up i'll break it down in pt 2
    here u go sis u ready fo tis .....?
     
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    truetothecause Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    R.A.W.

    Ready
    Able
    Willing

    come on....go in for da killin
    take it to the max, no time for stillin
    the flow of Loves spillin
    wash me...i'm willin
    opening embracing just what u dealin....

    cooooommmme on wit it!


    M.E.
    :hearts2:
     
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    Rich$$!!! When are you going to put out this book ?
    Or tell me you did already? Man I see you're still going at it.
    I've had a bad case of writers block and I feel I'm coming out of it. Might start testing the waters again.

    I hope your year is going well.

    Long time no speak, I'll be around now though

    -L
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    here i comeeeeeeee look out !!! Trueeeeeeeeeee

    yep i'm still workin it from a down low and not yet but very soon
    you be hearing from me bruh !
     
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