Black Poetry : other peoples thoughts

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by moham, Sep 1, 2005.

  1. moham

    moham Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I could see myself
    Walking through the crowd
    I..hung..high

    HigH
    above the sound

    this was magical
    ethereally surreal.
    This was peace

    I did not feel ashamed
    I felt no fear
    (other peoples thoughts)
    I couldn't hear

    I
    was

    free

    (for a moment)
     
  2. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very well put, nice smooth drop, and point well taken
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well felt dis was on point
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The experience of just being you, just free to be, is such a calming experience. Feeling your flow.
     
  5. Wisdom7

    Wisdom7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That's freedom! Very smooth peice poet! :rolling:
     
  6. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that's real deep.
    Went over a couple of people's heads.
    I like.
     
  7. Kamau~

    Kamau~ Active Member MEMBER

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    word....i felt what u felt while reading this...
    very nice...
     
  8. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that was ill
     
  9. Auroraflower

    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey sis :kiss:

    this was beautifull.....

    and i imagined you when you where in this moment....



    ones i see you do this ......i,ll take a pic of you


    it would be a nice pic :)









    Loveauroraflower:heart:
     
  10. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    i agree with aurora...this poem was beautiful
    keep flowin poet..

    one love
    khasm
     
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