Quiet Poetry Lounge : Othella

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by BaduX, Apr 19, 2003.

  1. BaduX

    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Living my life as Othello
    I've been betrayed
    And jealousy was bestowed upon me
    I trust nothing moving but myself
    In this life alone, I stand
    I trust no man
    The wicked is perishing by far.
    Praying to God I don't end up behind those permanent bars.:cool:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    all in stride .....i like dis flow here keep bringing it !
     
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    i'm lovin' this.....good job girl!
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    BaduX

    Life is hard but thank dear GOD that there are some decent people left
    Don't give up cuz someone will come who has no brain cleft

    :thanks: for sharing
     
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    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx for taking the time to read my poems and commenting on them!
    God Bless!
     
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    nice piece.
     
  7. Poetic Justice

    Poetic Justice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Girl, take a breath and keep strutting.
    There is no power stronger than god on this earth.
    Make your mind over, if we allow ourselves to love another with so much passion, how important is the body that has served us well.
    I will learn alot from you!
     
  8. BaduX

    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx for the comments...thanx shawnswife, purplemoon, monetary, lovelygoldenone, and rich. if you'll like that one check out the others ones!!!
    God Bless

    Thanx for reading even if you didn't comment
    God Bless
     
  9. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful poem sista like yo flows peace and blessins