Black Poetry : Osmotic Xperience (ruff cut)

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It ain't triggered by the sun intermingling
    with my melanin which causes a switch
    in my hemoglobin and causes my axons and dendrites
    to overreact that causes a twitch in my
    BEing

    it is through "Osmotic Xperience"
    that causes these manifestations
    of my knowledge of this MESS AGE
    to spew from my mouth

    there is a spirit that through your
    devious diabolical demonic dealings
    with my people ... that has kept
    my mental on ALERT and my BEing
    on my blakness...

    I wake daily with the sounds
    of chains rattling in my mind
    and I find myself using hydogen peroxide to
    to cleanse the welts from the whips
    on my back given to me as a
    gift from my forefathers and mothers and
    sisters and brothers

    so eye don't forget

    The spirit is like the sun...it's gone
    rub my skin and at times...to get me
    to a state of understanding...burn me...
    and other times caress me
    /see my vibe ain't no...

    ...preconceived hallucination
    due to the fact that I suffer from
    a bipolar disorder...it is

    a reaction to this "old ***
    world order" dominated by Youropeans
    who kidnapped Africans
    who renamed Kemet
    who claimed so many of
    our accomplishments as a...
    "made in amerikkka" thing.......

    my vibe iz "a blak thing"
    and you just won't understand
    ...no matter how "liberal" you
    claim to be...

    my "osmotic Xperience" proves this as
    fact...and all these truths will be made
    self-evident the next time
    another brother is gunned down in the
    streets by mercenaries you call cops
    or caught on the block by a bullet
    from a misgudied maladjusted
    brain"bleach"washed mind

    ....and the spirit places 9mm holes
    on my daydreams and paint the insides
    of my cranium with the screams so that I don't
    "get the times twisted" and forget that
    the pacifier "freedoom*" has extended
    for me to suckle has been tainted by
    a system designed to keep a particular
    "order" in order

    (****** to the back)

    and "what it is right now" is not a line from
    a bussa bus track but a question
    in which the answer is absorbed
    through my skin via my "Osmotic Xperience"

    through this Xperience, I live a sleepless
    existence...

    (c)2001 blakverb

    *Freedoom, term extracted from a piece by Afridancr

    this piece is still a work in progress
     
  2. epiphany

    epiphany Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blakverb.......

    An excellent piece......
    on the black experience. :toast:


    Epiphany :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    black awareness

    man never will i forget the whip lash to my forefathers back
    many nights i lay awake feelin' da pain left behind.....****!:maddd:
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    epiphany & $$RICH$$

    thank you for the replies.

    much respect is given
    blak
     
  5. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    verb

    you already know what I think......
     
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