Black Poetry : O'Silent "

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Softly
    into da fallin light at dusk
    the lust was presented
    like a giveaway
    as i weep like a child
    as tyme pass my manhood
    cast upon me flooded with
    remembrance

    O' silent !

    Moving on the twisted road
    followed by dusty ventures
    my trust guides me through
    da many fields, crossing da
    pond bound in chains
    blistered feet n' handz
    torn skin , lash backside
    pulling back as the hot
    radiant sun glar down
    my shadow sweep pass me
    leaving a wet trail

    O' Silent !

    As the crave arrives
    my hunger become deeper
    stronger and hotter
    what is it , who is it
    stain in the blood of my
    forefather tappin at my will
    i hear the voice calling

    O' Silent !

    all at once the glamor
    that flash was no more
    washing my sins away
    in da night , i fear no evil
    as the moon drop beyond
    the hills to day break
    my soul rise still bound
    in the temptation to be
    free i taste this freedom
    ahead yet afar
    moving through da valley
    aproching the forest of life

    O' Silent !

    I'm still not free.
    :nono:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The weight of the forefathers can be quite a heavy load to bear, especially when we forget that the load still does exist, even in this day and age. Well thought out and conveyed scribe poet. Flow on brotha....Props for this.
     
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    Thank u sista ............indeed
     
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    seeking freedom through wisdom of thy Father
    forth he so loveth me to guide me on path within
    my existance O' Silent for da great windz speak
    and spirits rise before me in tongue i hear thy voice.
    O'Silent
    shhhhhhhhh!!!
     
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    this was a beautiful write i enjoyed the read i could feel the words as i read went a poetic ride with you....Angel
     
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    tyte scribe man...past pains produce pondering pressures...
    i felt this joint...
    one love
    khasm
     
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    Thankz Angel shhhhhh! as i manifest in today being

    Thankz bruh Khasm man u feel me on dis i see
    the stress one feel at times .
     
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    freedom awaits from the pass pain we just need to keep moving forward
    Thankz to all for the visit and love .......peace