Black Poetry : Orion's Love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Hunter, Apr 12, 2001.

  1. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Orion's Love

    Together
    We kiss
    From
    Two
    Separate hills
    Awaiting
    The
    Setting
    Of sun
    Until
    Light rays
    Fade
    Into
    Evening's dusk
    And
    We
    Complete
    Our sketch
    Of mountain
    Then
    Sky
    Opens up
    And
    Swallows us
    We
    The blessed
    Children of
    Orion
    And
    Cloud
    Will never know
    How
    Ink on pillow
    Flows
    When
    Two
    Poets meet
    To
    Make love

    *vagina chronicles*

    Hunter
    All Rights Reserved
     
  2. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    can I get some of that love? Hunter, this is...what word do you like? fantastic, tight, "off da hook", Classic, Cool,etc. what word do you like? okay......here we go "10".

    one love,blak

    p.s. been meaning to ask you this, what are you hunting? :)
     
  3. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm with b.v.

    what shall I say? You brought it, my sustah...

    Poets define tantric sensuality ~ love's cataclysmic epitome.

    you exposed the raw nerves in me ...

    and I wanna THANK YA! :D

    A

    :heart:
     
  4. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You're Deep Gurl!

    Have fun making love! ha ha ha ha ha Nice piece!
    Desert Storm

    ...the vagina chronicles....gurl,you're to much!
     
  5. saleem

    saleem Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    never

    and I do mean NEVER do you disappoint me Ms. Huntress. Somebody else told you this and it bears repeating....

    you ain't got to be searching for dat orgasm...cuz you CAME all ova dis one!

    keep cummin widit Stroke Mistress :D

    saleem
     
  6. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HUNTER....

    i knew it would be tyght to death!!

    didn't expect anything less... dats just
    how you do your thang... flow on Queen...

    NothinButLove...
    Sunshyne~
     
  7. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    woww, now that's tyght! i really loved the flow of this piece, hunter. keep on scribin', i'm lovin' it!
     
  8. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    blakverb, Alyce, Desert Storm, LISTERSCRIBIN, Saleem, GA SUNSHYNE,

    thank-you for seeing beyond the clouds...you are all

    "the blessed children of Orion"

    Spreading my love while you keep sharing your stars with me

    *Orion*
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Man this is the second piece
    I have read from you poet
    This is too hot for real
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome i want some of this love wow!
     
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