Black Poetry : original emotions

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by dnommo, May 17, 2001.

  1. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    depression is depressed today
    he has no room to remind me
    of the mistakes of a past gone by;

    anger is so angry at me today
    he can’t come into my life and
    point out the things to upset me;

    sadness is crying uncontollably
    she cannot rain of my happiness
    of a peace that I now dwell in;

    and confusion? Well, he’s confused
    for he can’t figure out how he lost
    his strong grip on my deepest thoughts;

    hope seems to be very hopeful today
    she has searched my heart, removed
    the pains and given me a new outlook;

    forgiveness is so forgiving today
    for he saw what I have done and
    chose to give me another chance;

    happiness is very happy today
    he has found a place in my heart
    and made room for a garden of joy;

    and peace? Peace is very peaceful
    planting in the garden of joy seeds
    of serenity, comfort and meditation;
     
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    and Faith

    continues to grow....she casts light in all our dark corners, keeping all doubt and fear at bay.

    You give me meat in due season, as always D-Mo..
    thank you,

    a
     
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    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks alyce,

    i left this one unfinished for a reason...there are many emotions that we go through adn i feel that as each one enters they shall add to it...thanks for being the first...

    ***like minds***
     
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    this is so very beautifully..... i can feel this...

    8th!
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    brother,

    this is nice ... I mean, are you sure we weren't twins in another realm? :rolling:

    peace times the horizon

    one love,blak
     
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    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak,

    i think you came out first, grabbed up as much of the gift you could carry and left the rest for me (looking at tcurmbs in my hand) :lol: :rolling:

    thanks for the read man and i knew you would vibe off of this...
     
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