Black Poetry : Orgasmic Privation

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  1. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Midstream.....not far from rapture.
    She's jus~ jus~ just about to (((SCREAM!!)))

    He exhales, "Ahhhhhh!!"

    As he rises kissing her lips he says,

    "**** Baby, that was good."
    rolls over and closes his eyes
    ........falls fast to sleep

    Suffering from orgasmic privation.
    Tears take their familiar trip
    down her cheeks......she passionately speaks,

    "Baby.........I wasn't there with you."

    Her voice swallowed up from the sound of his,
    I am...... oh, so content (((SNORE!))).

    "Sighing," she drifts off..............
    into another periodic affair in her head.

    In the morning he rises to see a smile on her face
    ........flexes his muscles and says,

    "Yeah! Look how Daddy put a smile on that face."


    Madd Sistahly Love :heart:
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    NO DADDY. Look how mamma put a smile on her own face. I love this...absolutely love this.

    Zhay
     
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    When you be brangin it str8 like this

    sista-gurlll, all I can do is sit back and just watch you han'l bidnis! I loveded this heah! Too real for far too many!

    Thank ya!

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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Zhay & Alyce,

    I see yall feeling my flo.......Thanks for the :heart:



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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hmmmmm!!!

    I wonder what momma did to get that smile
    hummmm!!!! very good flow!:heart: :toast: :heart:
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now...now,

    $RICH$ A ladee can't tell all her secrets. How'bout...... you use your imagination. :D Thanks for the :heart:

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well now let me think!

    :eek: O' my she didn't !.......yes she did!
    woooweeeee!! much :heart: back at ya.
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Coco

    This was top knotch writing here... it's a sad situation to be left like dat. however all to true too often.

    Madd Respect!
    You know wud it iuh...
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $RICH$

    Girl gotz to do.....wha'ah girl gotz to do. :wink:

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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Reas,

    Tell me about......talk'bout your downers :D

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