Black Poetry : Orgasm & Rain

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  1. DigginThaShyne

    DigginThaShyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rain falls, crystal streaks from semi-blue skies,
    reminiscent of
    past days,
    fantasizing about
    future kisses, and sweet, succulent wishes,
    the prelude to
    most temporary goodbyes,
    love, slung out in a distant star,
    pulsating, vibrating, radiating
    doing an erotic little shimmy
    upon the scrim
    of all my fantasies,
    lust comes back, fantastically three-fold,
    swiftly,
    powerfully,
    absorbingly,
    an accelerated flower, sprouting, growing,
    tendrils of tenderness
    taking hold over me,
    touch me, not gently,
    but with the force
    of your mind,
    feather-tease me with your charismatic charm
    wine and dine me
    within that mental realm
    somewhere between
    DEVOUT & DEVINE,
    elation running wet with the intoxicating perspiration
    of wanting you,
    no--- needing you
    to
    make me come/cum/come
    crashing into
    each of your
    delectable walls

    Rain falls, like lick-able diamond tears,
    shining bright on you, joy before my eyes
    steers my
    concentration,
    dazzling me, as I clutch to your
    hair, neck, lips, breasts, thighs,
    with the realization
    that
    I’ve never met- a -

    physical
    mental
    emotional
    spiritual

    lover quite like you
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOOWEEEE!!!! I'm loving this flow!!!!! This is tight!!!! Bring me some more!!!
     
  3. DigginThaShyne

    DigginThaShyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bishop--

    Thanks....appreciating the love...and hopefully, the best is yet to come.
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (sings) Let the rain fall down upon me.

    Wow! This is sweet gentle poetry
    Thanks for sharing.

    Coco :heart:
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what a piece....and what imagery.... "diamond tears".... hah mer-c!

    alyce
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    now that's sum powerful schtuff right here!!!
    you got it!
    -7:spinstar:
     
  7. DigginThaShyne

    DigginThaShyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To my poetic fam,

    Thanks for all the love and support....it feels good...especially from such superbly talented people....I'm glad you're all feeling this piece....thanks again....and keep scribin'

    MJ
     
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    herlove Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    are you .... heaven sent ..... this wassssssssssssss and it isssssssss
     
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    DaFlavaFul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thats what im talking about!that poetic pain!i sit in ur presence,"feather-tease me with your charismatic charm"
     
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    WOW! This was every way and place a woman wants to be loved. What an EXTREMLY sensual piece.
     
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