Black Poetry : Orgasm & Rain (Part 2)

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  1. DigginThaShyne

    DigginThaShyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And speaking of a lover like you....
    I failed to mention, the detailed attention
    you give to me
    lavishing me, sincerely in kisses,
    succulent and sweet, making me express my wishes
    in deep throaty moans
    for your enjoyment alone,
    cause you’re teasing and pleasing me,
    in a way all your own,
    unique, like weather patterns within Jupiter’s eye,
    you supply me a satisfaction
    that seems to defy laws of gravity,
    uplifting me to new levels and degrees,
    until I’m lost in a your pleasure zone,
    aiming to please,
    and reciprocate this feeling of
    unbridled intensity
    shockwaves of passion burrow my body
    reaching the density
    of the innermost recesses of my soul,
    until I’m avidly longing to caress and hold
    your passion, like your sweet breasts in my hand,
    you bring out the best in me,
    raising the bar like only you can,
    the lust feeds us,
    manipulating me so,
    till I begin to pledge allegiance
    to the warm nectar flowing like honey between your legs,
    my taste for it becoming so intense,
    I just my start to beg,
    or scream: “SWEET JESUS”
    as we tenderly tease and touch
    the places that bring the biggest smiles
    to our faces,
    our hands/fingers/tongues moving
    in delightfully altered paces,
    heart accelerated with the effects of our sensuous embraces,
    every nerve of me please as all of you slowly traces
    erotic curves around the center of my attraction
    and if satisfaction could be personified
    it’d be you and me occupied
    in a tangled web of flesh and kisses,
    dismissing the rain, pouring down outside
    like a thousand drumbeats applauding
    and when we’ve finished, arms and legs interlocked,
    any bad thoughts completely blocked,
    former ideas of satisfaction slid aside
    with a wicked knowing grin,
    you stroke my face, and rest your head on my shoulder….
    a quick break before we start again
     
  2. LiLi

    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    now...this is the way that i like to start my day! can i get a SWEET JESUS??! LOL...this is great!
     
  3. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I cain't e'vm han'ldis....bbl

    whew!

    alyce
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :blush: now you got me blushing...
    this was betta than gooooood!
    -7:spinstar:
     
  5. DigginThaShyne

    DigginThaShyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all for showing me love....it's great to know, that my gift of expression can be shared with such a wonderful audience....much love

    and LiLi....I'm sure there's a line a block long of men offering you a lifetime supply of Sweet Jesus :)....by the way, I absolutely loved "Marcescent (of the Ghetto)"....magnificent peace

    keep scribin' and the love runs deeper and deeper,

    MJ
     
  6. Gaylee

    Gaylee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mmmmmmmmmm now this is a real pleasurable read, right in the zone. Very beautifully described.
     
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