Black Poetry : Oral Facination (erotic)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Spirit2All, Dec 26, 2008.

  1. Spirit2All

    Spirit2All Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There’s nothing like it,
    this feeling I know
    of taking it deep
    and bending down low

    No, No – not the sex
    And the wind and the grind
    But the feel of his length in my mouth
    Blows my mind

    Wet and Invitin’
    Hard and Excitin’
    Got my **** jumpin’
    For real – this is My thing

    His Tings is my ting
    Black Man, come right in
    I’ll get down on my knees
    Pout my lips just to please …

    … and tease til you blow
    ***** wet ‘cos you said so
    It gets to drippin’
    While I stay lickin’
    Just hittin’
    That Spot.

    “Yeah, pretty girl,
    learn to be good.
    Take that wet tongue
    And control this hard wood

    Suck at the top
    And lick down below
    I just GOT to blow

    As I grab your hair
    you give me that stare
    that says you don’t care
    Girl say a prayer .. I just can’t stop
    This secret affair
     
  2. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ain't nothing wrong w that
    Somebody feeling a fascination orally
    Very hot
    to the Point of Knowing ones
    enjoyment
    thrills
    of fullfillment...
    Hot s c r i b e poet! Hot!
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hmmm...

    i'mma gon' git back witcha on this hea.:)
     
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    MY OH MY....on my way for a cold shower.....somebody help me please!!!!!!!!! Kinda weak in the knees here. hahahahha :em3300:

    Lilpea :1on1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    This was hot deep and i couldwork it like no other
    taking to da extreme from a brother ......whewwww!

    while i did notice a few words place'd are on our ban word list
    they are astract out for a reason try not to go round them while
    we don't wan't to hinder your work but as a community we hold a
    standard and from the past these words was used wrongly do visit
    this link to see our ban word list....

    http://www.destee.com/forums/showpost.php?p=219305&postcount=9

    Thank you in Advance

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    lilpea Moderator STAFF

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    Rich please redo that link it didnt take.

    Lilpea :1on1:
     
  7. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was one hot drop !
     
  8. Spirit2All

    Spirit2All Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Duly noted @ Rich - thanks so much for the heads up in future .. glad you liked it though. This piece (and all other eroticies posted by me) is the product of a few years of celibacy ... hence the 'hot-realism' Glad you enjoyed though xx

    Spirit2All
     
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    Rokksteady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This piece remind me of a girl I know... actually a couple ;)

    I likes it, well done!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Most welcome ......indeed it was a blazzin treat
     
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