Black Poetry : Opus Pocus

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  1. Nahshon

    Nahshon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The page
    Blatantly adjusted
    With subtlety
    Reminiscent of sketches on an artist's canvas
    Except
    We know these shapes well
    They're symbols, a language
    Like ancient hieroglyphs
    It’s tonal, mathematical, perfection in all details
    It’s the language of the universe, of angels, of God
    The sound resonant
    Augments, Diminishes, till Perfection
    A Poetic Concerto
    Opus Octavation(octave 8 shun) of shakras
    Manipulation of 7 three times
    Corresponding to A,B,C,D,E,F,G
    The arrangement sharp
    Colors flat and fat
    So natural
    As if notated by masters
    Like Jaco `Trane, Miles and Monk
    The flow is mystical
    Yet composed in perfect time
    Improvisational
    Secured with a staff.
    Supported by bars.
    Measured for accuracy
    A visceral language to be heard
    Origin, an exponential of infinity
    Seek I have the scientific equation, geometric solution,
    resolution to afflictions.
    And now I breathe it
    I breathe surround sound, like a fish in water
    I get booming system drive by, contact highs
    It’s the drug for the disease of life, yet the cure in of itself is the addiction
    Has me under it's influence
    And I need to get another fix.
    MUSIC
    Boundless
    Freedom
    See I’m consumed by it’s presence
    It takes my body over
    The consummation of my affections for music
    Is dance
    This my Opus pocus


    Nahshon-Rae 7-9-2003
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    brutha Nahshon........u have just open up
    a master piece to da world
    man i love the depth of this flow and how u mastered it to the page tyteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! scribe gotta read it again as i feel dis. loved it
     
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    Hey Nahshon
    mathematical precision ,
    the universal language….
    music. endless.feeling that beat
    Peace
     
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    nice arrangment...
    peace
    khasm
     
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    glad ya'll feeling this piece...
     
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    Nahshon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    just had to bring this piece back for your viewership....
     
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    and agin i bow to the writter da poet da face
    dis a masterpiece i am humble to it .....Thank u
     
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    excellent

    one of the best I've read...
     
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    I was feelin this rhythm :)
     
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