Khasm13 : Opus CCXI

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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    my mind is on recess
    too much external forces to digest
    too much added weight on my chest
    like a two ton pin crest prompting stress
    i strive to be the best but is my best good enough for the rest?
    i’m missing gaps in time…so i slowed on smoking cess
    my destiny is escaping me presently when before it seemed plain to me and elementary
    maybe i need to be....recalculating my fate…cause it seems i’m surrounded by hate
    i need a clean slate and i want an honest mate…never had the need to use loot as bait
    the sex is always greater then great…but at 32 i’m trying to wait
    cause i need more then a revolving door with my main object my members pleasure
    XXX hardcore…until that becomes a bore…goodness…my eyes are getting sore
    why did it take so long for me to want more…i’m tired of keeping score because it’s tragic lore
    the lore of the tragic…kid creole’s black magic…so heavy you have to double bag it
    and it can get uglier then an old sea hag gets….no need to futher drag [email protected]
    this scene almost turned my dreams plastic…thank God instead of broken shards i’ve gained elastic
    yo….
    i'm pissed off from looking at this computer screen all day…i went to college so i could keep da devil at bay
    but nay…he punishes me repeatedly forcing me to crunch numbers with no scenery
    demeaning me…shenanigans and thievery…stealing the little joy the world brings to me
    i'm going blind…the magnetic waves are mean to me
    while less talented lackeys lean on me…like joe clark
    images of fisticuff scrimmages is what i see in the dark
    why do i have to work so hard while others trick off time like a bard?
    i feel like pulling cards…but then i would not be a team player
    so instead i say a prayer…after work…then drink 3 beers and take a bayer
    and imagine i’m in a world strictly of good and bad and i’m a dragon slayer
    slaying feeble evil without a care…but ish is not black and white
    and ish is not just morning and night
    so many grays causing haze on uneven days
    letting me know that ish is not right
    as much as i want to….my moms raised me to not give up the fight
    so i fight the black mans plight until i can no longer write
    until i can no longer get up on stage and open someone’s third eye sight
    i’ve never been simple…some say too abstract…and rub their temple
    because of my abnormal insight…
    fact and fiction are wrapped up in my diction…
    maybe too many herbs boiling in the kitchen…for everyone to listen
    but still that’s my mission…
    to be heard whether spitting reasonable slurs to the absurd
    just like ms. mary muffet ate curds and way…i’m locked in a battle
    from the city to the suburbs to the valley
    to seize the day or let the dreams of the kernal of an eternal journal pass away….
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    now u out did ya self on dis one
    from the lure to the core in da pass way
    of this deep journey ride u took me on !
    TYTEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  3. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *sigh*
    *chills**chills*
    *chills**chills**chills*
    Reading you...is like that first fresh breath of morning air
    It surges through your body in an instant
    renews your senses
    stimulates your mind
    and adjusts your perspectives... and I cant get enuff of it whew
    so having said that...HURRY UP LOLL
    I mean goodness what i gotta wait till my grant grandchilds graduation to read anotha scribe from you or what smh *sigh*
    brothas these days smh always wanna hold out the goods smh hehehe
    It is always a blessing to read you brotha...always :)
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOL @ Triniti and the great grandchild's graduation comment. This was just jam packed with awesome phrases brotha. I particularly loved this line: "maybe too many herbs boiling in the kitchen…for everyone to listen
    but still that’s my mission…" I know that square peg in a round hole type feeling. Anyway, brotha this was fantastic.
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah
    seize the day

    you are indeed more then one see
    you spin a reality of what is to be

    ====> rubbing your shoulders<======

    yes it is hard to relax
    when you see so many negative facts
    yet...
    it's seeing those facts thats what makes you more then
    any Phat Cat Jack*winking*
    dag when that #1 come into your life
    wow..so lucky she'll be*smiling*

    the reality of that dream
    is what i see before me
    quote"fact and fiction are wrapped up in my diction…"

    nice flow
    flow flow flow :)

    Blue:heart:
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    khasm...really wonderful word and rhythm play...and you said it yoursellf..
    "sieze the day or let the dream of the kernal .........pass away"
    and I don't think that would be a good idea...
    flow on...
    flow
     
  7. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mannnnnnnnnnn you were sick with this right here! Straight up sick!
    cats need to be real within before reality checks the chin so my brother khasm can release that poetic prolific word play spin!
    You did the dam thing my brother! :cook:
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Young, Gifted and Black like that!
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You did slay some demons in this post. Flaming PC :bomb: pen scribe. :picture: this your rolling! :rolling:

    Looking for that special lady. You will find cause she will love your flow. Keep painting paradise it's all in our minds. The devil will be held at bay.
     
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