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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Chastity, Nov 24, 2003.

  1. Chastity

    Chastity Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My eyelids unlock.
    Pupil in shock,
    I glance at the clock,
    And realize that I made it.
    Mouth open wide,
    Breath still inside,
    Causing my chest heave.
    And I’m relieved,
    That He kept me to see the sun.
    I begin to fret,
    At the thought that I could forget,
    To utter the words ‘Thank You.’
    Though it seems relentless,
    So are His showers…
    Miraculous healing, protecting, revealing,
    Delivering, saving, situation behaving,
    Providing, joy giving, once dead now living…
    Blessing, relieving stress and, His awesome…
    Powers.
    And again I fret,
    At the thought that I may forget,
    To utter the words ‘Thank You.’
    So I say so now.
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wave: welcome again......
    this is a very beatiful write...thank you for sharing
     
  3. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am feelin this and lovin this drop, Chastity. Again, welcome to destee! :wave:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome

    welcome to destee.com quiet flow
    welcome to the home of poetic peace & love
    this was a very sweet scribe u posed
    flow on ! and welcome !! within da family :spin: :toast:
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
  5. Bluewater

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    Welcome :wave: to the family
    of love and embrace
    this is a wondeful poem
    yes please to share more
    Peace
     
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