Quiet Poetry Lounge : Opening My Eyes, Anew

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Opening my eyes
    anew
    Feeling reborn
    in you
    As a new day
    blossoms, unfolding
    petals of possibilities
    mirrors of my soul, beholding
    all that was meant to be
    A rainbow of hopes and dreams
    finally realized on this day
    In this moment or so it seems
    Or perhaps all the experiences
    of a lifetime, all of the mistakes
    and accomplishments have
    culminated to this, as the mind awakes
    And I'm opening my eyes
    anew....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    crossing paths of life from all due
    eyes open to light and anew soon
    da heart feels it and mind on it
    when one open eyes, Anew
    tyte write sistah watz.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you, brotha Rich, for your flow on this, and kind response.
     
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    great piece of writing...
    hope is ever our beacon light
    and this had hope shinning all through it...
    bravo...
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for letting your kind light shine thru with your kind response 7thPoet.
     
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    Ah, this is so refreshing and inspirational. I dig the vision, sister.
     
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    this was so refreshing...
    there is nothing like
    the feeling of new vision...

    loving this flow...
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gempis, I thank you for saying that this piece was inspirational.
    Thank you sage. It is always a good feeling to feel a new awakening.
     
  9. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    hush now
    i hear the baby cry
    the pain of mom relaxing in
    the warming fluids
    the babbbbbby cry
    mommmmmmy cry
    new beginnings..
    new.......again!
    twas really nice watz...nice
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ahhh, yes, like the feeling of a mom with a newborn babe. Thank you deepy, you have such a poetic mind.
     
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