Black Poetry : " Opening: Adore "

[Hypnotize]

Ga - me and you just gon' be some cryin fools then
cuz I am touched by how you seem to
identify and appreciate my work - it means
the world to me.


No fan club yet -
Just please continue to post Your stuff -


Do I teach ?? - LOL --
nope. - LOL that was funny !

Ohyeah - ANNOUNCEMENT ---
she and I are no longer together.
This was written recently, as I am
STILL letting go of her.
we were together from 95-99 , and
I went through the motions
but I can't deny how I adore(d) her.

thank you all so kindly.

 

[ladybug]

it is as simple as "it made me smile" and that in it self saids alot

 

[blakverb]

Hyp,

(crying) Man...you done did it again (weep)...keep it up (sob)...this is dang tight you done brought me to tears (nose blowing)...Okay I ain't crying but dang this scribe is dope!


one love, blak

 

[8th wonder]

This piece is so deeply felt that I can....
visualize the kiss that you gave to her...
i can smell the ocean that you speak of...
I feel the current of the emotions brought in and out within each wave.

moved in many ways.... Loved it to the 8th power..

8th!

 

[$$RICH$$]

U JUST DROP A BOMB OF REAL TYGHT ****!
WOOOWEEEE! BIG TYME .....FLOW ON BIG BOSS..
DES BE ALL GOOD YA KNOW THAT RYGHT.