Black Poetry : " Opening: Adore "

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  1. Hypnotize

    Hypnotize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **** Before reading this,
    keep in mind that Hypnotize is really weird - .

    If you ( the reader ) take your thumb & index
    finger and gently grab your bottom lip -
    you notice a curve.
    I think the curve is caused by kissing .
    I've always thought that.
    Keep that in mind.
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    " Opening: Adore "

    Every lip has a curve,
    and off this curve rolls kisses, wishes, and words -
    connecting life to love
    or earth to sky.
    Once Crestfallen, now riding high tidal waving titles
    goodbye until waters rush ashore
    once again decorating living rooms w/ seashells.

    Belonging to You is leasing myself to love,
    REleasing myself to hugs that hold treasures
    & turn ramen noodles to mixed vegatables
    gourmet.

    I'd pull 1 eternity and 5 forevers tied together
    inside a sweater up the side of Mt. Everest
    just to raise your frown.

    Every cloud's platinum lining,
    and off THIS curve roll kisses, wishes, words -
    fitting his & hers
    connecting fingertips to touch
    or " why " to " how " .

    Belonging to you is selling myself to love w/ no
    return policy.

    Opportunity Knocking
    I A .... dore opening your eyes
    to mine - finding God in every lip has a curved
    grading scale ,
    and off THIS curve , waiting around the bend ---


    A friend, amends, borrowed time to spend -
    connecting " dream " to " day ".

    Belong(ing) to love is sign(ing)
    a line dotted with I's
    look(ing) across(ing) T(ee)'s and socks
    licking thighs noticing how
    every hip has a curve.

    brownskinsofthair -
    delicate art framed in art.

    "You between 2 mirrors is beauty's infinity."


    and I say corny things like that cuz
    your smile is my language and I speak
    kisses, wishes, words .............. like " I adore you " .






    _____________________________________________________
    needless to say, she must've put it on me huh ?
    4 yr. love affair - and this is the door it opened .
    _____________________________________________________
    ( sorry for how long it was)
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HYPNOTIZE....

    i have tears in my eyes!... why?
    i really can't say... all i know is
    that this piece has moved me... &
    i am so serious... i am always more
    & more amazed at your talent everytime
    i read you!! thank you for sharing
    this!! DAYUM!! I LOVED IT!!....

    all of this:
    NothinButLove...
    Sunshyne~

    **where do i get the that fan club application??!**
     
  3. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aaahhh ****!

    now this **** hea is explosive!!! keep droppin them bombs dog!!!

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hyp...

    Don't be sorry for how the heart flowz...if the flow lasts for infinity, then let it flow like that...

    I most def enjoyed ya sentiments fella...she is lucky ta have a brotha that feels so passionately!!!

    Excellent scribe!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yo this was maaad tyte!!
     
  6. Hypnotize

    Hypnotize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ga - me and you just gon' be some cryin fools then
    cuz I am touched by how you seem to
    identify and appreciate my work - it means
    the world to me.


    No fan club yet -
    Just please continue to post Your stuff -


    Do I teach ?? - LOL --
    nope. - LOL that was funny !

    Ohyeah - ANNOUNCEMENT ---
    she and I are no longer together.
    This was written recently, as I am
    STILL letting go of her.
    we were together from 95-99 , and
    I went through the motions
    but I can't deny how I adore(d) her.

    thank you all so kindly.
     
  7. ladybug

    ladybug Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it is as simple as "it made me smile" and that in it self saids alot
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hyp,

    (crying) Man...you done did it again (weep)...keep it up (sob)...this is dang tight you done brought me to tears (nose blowing)...Okay I ain't crying but dang this scribe is dope!


    one love, blak
     
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    This piece is so deeply felt that I can....
    visualize the kiss that you gave to her...
    i can smell the ocean that you speak of...
    I feel the current of the emotions brought in and out within each wave.

    moved in many ways.... Loved it to the 8th power..

    8th!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    U JUST DROP A BOMB OF REAL TYGHT ****!
    WOOOWEEEE! BIG TYME .....FLOW ON BIG BOSS..
    DES BE ALL GOOD YA KNOW THAT RYGHT.
     
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