Black Poetry : Open

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Lahana Mysteria, May 3, 2002.

  1. Lahana Mysteria

    Lahana Mysteria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "Come into me as if you care to stay,
    stray far from never,
    underestimate your power,
    and withhold nothing...

    You make me Feel,
    interrogate my will at risk of nothing more,
    evermore...

    Teach me,
    I am open,
    to breathe you in..."
     
  2. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whissful and wishfully beautiful

    Your poetic flow is so soft and unassuming, I must go to
    the Poetic archives and seek more of your scribes, I loved this
    for it's simple beauty!
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
     
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