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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, Mar 18, 2001.

  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When you come to me like the first rays of sun,
    your light

    envelops my body
    warms my soul
    melts my heart
    dries my tears;

    and like the soft, sleeping petals of the morning glory,
    I open

    Alyce, 1999
     
  2. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    someone else said it ...
    no matter what the flow
    if it belongs to Alyce
    it's sensuous

    go 'head gurl!
    everybody aint able

    Destee
     
  3. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    pure xcellence......my god

    you say in a few poetic lines
    what poets bust the brain cells tryin' to xpress...
    Alyce (pretty name)

    you are the best female poet my eyes have ever read on the face of the internet....seriously....

    keep it up
    in admiration and awe
    j'hiah
    nfinite from his serene garden
     
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    saleem Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ms A

    This is your signature piece, for true. Thank you for bringing it here for us to feel, and get yet another glimpse of 'you'.

    s
     
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    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...the soft, sleeping petals of the morning glory.

    Write the words Poet...write the words!

    BE
     
  6. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this 'peace'

    is most special; it pleases me that you feel it, because this is how he moves throughout the whole of my being ~ it's truly all about the lover of my heart/mind/body/soul.

    And jh, you know you put me in a terrible bind. You are far too kind, my brother. I offer my humble thanks for such high praise...

    Peace and blessings,

    A
     
  7. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alyce,

    This was as pretty as a flower petal
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I agree with jazzymoonchild, this blossomed like a garden.
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    just like a morning flower this was very nice read....Angel
     
  10. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    that blend of nature...naturally
    ...so nice...sweet and warm...
    i like the way you write
     
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