Black Poetry : open Your eyes

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by caramelpython, Nov 24, 2003.

  1. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Open your eyes...
    Come on and give it a try....
    Stop playing all the games..
    Stop living the lie.

    Game regonizes game...
    And dam your's is lame.
    Mine spits truth like flames..
    Like twin toweres and planes.

    So I ask you again to...

    Open your eyes...
    Come on and give it a try..
    I'm more than my name might tend to imply..
    Better yet...
    I'm more deeper than any book you can buy.

    You say caramel....
    Come on and give me a try..
    And I'm more inclined than not to find out why.
    Heck I cant even lie...
    Another time, another place ..
    I would part them thighs.

    But I ask again....

    Open your eyes...
    Come on give it a try...
    Stop selling yourself short..
    With all these other guys.

    $2 Ho....
    $5 trick...
    $20 a blow
    $75 to hit?

    Sex to pay car notes
    sex to pay rent
    sex for clothes
    Now your bootie's over spent.

    Sister you need to drop to your knees to repent
    instead of droping to your knees to 50 cent.
    Pick yourself up Ma your body's worth more that the dollar
    Worth more that some lame *** brother who just wants to holla.

    So I beg you to....

    Open your eyes...
    Come on give it a try

    Just some thoughts.. hope you enjoy.
     
  2. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you have quickly written your way into my heart, liked this flow. knees, 50 cent, you are too much, but this is oh so real too.
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    iiright my brother you laid this down...
    all the way down to the page....
    tight write...flow on please
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    much respect
    nice drop indeed
    Peace
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well heard hope this message spread
    tyte drop !
     
  6. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Randee... aaawwwww dag ty for the love.

    blkangel... just had it come to me as I wrote on the site

    Blue ty I didn't know what to expect from the form on this one.

    $$RICH$$ we all have a part to play in this scheme.
     
  7. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    up again for a friend

    Open your eyes my friend.. :coffee: .. and I hope you enjoy reading this one. hope you feel better.
     
  8. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lead us not into temptation I guess, unless it's on the real, and not for the dollar bill. I heard that...
     
  9. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow...your pen is relentless...
    this was an awakening piece
    shedding light on the state of many
    love the message here
    so true...
     
  10. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    watzinaname..Just trying to shed some light.


    angelicsage.......... just trying to :help: my sisters out. :thanks: lady!
     
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