Black Poetry : OPEN WINDOW

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Through my eyez
    i see your heart
    as i embrace da soul
    my life filters out

    I stand looking
    through this window
    of cares and compassion
    where only my eyez see

    My love in silvery Gold
    as i channel each star
    beyond da moonest of night
    i see u there before me

    not only do i wish
    but i pray upon the glow
    as i close my eyez
    once reopen i see hope

    I see us holding close
    and i know it was by fate
    a blessing and love
    so now i face to share my all

    This open window paints an image
    tells a story and leaves broken pieces
    of yesteryears and da present
    what do my future holds

    until i find my answer i'll just
    continue to look outward
    of a stone window
    as i watch da curse walk
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
     
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    Hi Brother Rich
    through your eyes
    the drip of your pen
    have create a warm spot in the heart
    making one feel so love
    wonderful flow my brother
    yes indeed :)

    Peace & Love
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was a nice piece rite herr rich
    so flow on

    blackluv and bp
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz sista Nevar for the visit within

    my my bluewaters your words hit like a sweet hug in da winter
    thank u very much sis for feelin me

    thankz GHETTOAMBITION i'll try my best to bring i correctly in flow
    ya far too kind , love ya
     
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    You always surprise me. Loved your scribe.

    Peace

    Patrice
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thank u a million tymes PCQueen
     
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    What a vision your window offers for you to behold. What a vivid scribe.
     
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    Thank u watz my sweet i was just watching / looking outward
     
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