Black Poetry : OPEN WINDOW pt.3 (BedRoom bliss)

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  1. $$RICH$$

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    On the convor of path
    upon the room of jazz
    in his arms in a rapture
    her body still tingles
    the lined spread of roses
    lay above her head
    compassionate tiny kisses
    round her mound throbbin
    as a heart beat the marks
    of his back in three lines
    redish rubbing her from
    head to toe in the erotic
    oils the aroma lingers and
    make passive through da
    open window
    embracin the moment
    slowly he opens her
    spreading as of wings
    from lowest motions
    sliding upward face first
    handz roaming her body
    she have a little wiggle
    legs took to air like a take off
    from a runway gently
    lip to lip a out pour of juices
    ripple down
    body heat and he become
    manly by shafty as she
    stroke little by little
    u can see the stiffness of
    his body and the sweet release
    inside a bliss of passion
    eroticly sounding off
    there was no void
    kissing the back of her neck
    steamy hot sticky wet
    she came more centered
    he enter slowly and on a
    rapid pace they clash bodies
    right their , right their !
    was the cry soom a moan
    he groaning wit ummmmm!
    rockin in rollin out
    it was pure extreme
    two finger rub of her
    nipple the twist of turn
    a yearn he burn
    she allow the flip
    skin to skin
    from the back in a bounce
    she grips the sheets and bite her lip
    bed room bliss in motion through da
    OPEN WINDOW !
    o'my i wanted it to be me
    the way she gave and gave
    he the dream of a vision
    and it took and took
    until she flat out in is comfort
    as they laid cross the bed
    sheets rumbled & wet
    laying in the nudity of passion
    he embrace her closer as said
    I Luv U
    she can only drop tears
    it was a joyful cry and she soon
    closed her eyes after a release
    of erotic extreme pleasure of bliss
    he smile and when to sleep

    morning after pt.4 Back door :heart: :hot: :hot: :hot: :luv:
     
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    lovin this wow
    flow on wit ya bad self....
    break it down...lookin fo da back door
    shoot....
     
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    Well, alrighty then, all that from an open window? Whew, too much for me to fathom. Do women still get the vapors? LOL....
     
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    Thankz Angel
    through the open window
    was like a mirror reflection
    but the back door is gonna
    get very hot and extreme

    who can stand the test
    will she fold under his charm
    or will he fall under her rapture?
    wow!!!
    da back door will bring it to light.
    Thankz sis
     
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    it's gonna get very deep
    at the back door morning after
    and this open window will
    reflect the bliss of eroticness

    who will make it to the door first ?
    wow....time will tell in pt.4
    the heat is on and these two
    under RED ALERT !
    yeap she got da vapors !
    he got the white liver !
    stay tune
     
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    as they fall
    upon his charm
    beings her rapture
    waiting...ya know i be greedy
    flow on my Brotha
     
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    yes indeed something cooking
    and it's not food !...........
    STAY TUNE !
     
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    pt.4 back door drops soon
    the heated passion as boiling
     
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    I don't know about u, but I'm going 2 start opening my window
    if this is happening from open windows, 4real.
    Cause I'm getting upset that I'm not getting the open window
    goodness. Tyte scribe and I'm wanting more. Loving the open window
    mini-series.
     
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    thankz sistah i feel ya
    coz the creator of open windows
    has a deep desire of passion
    as it unfoldz wish it was me !!!! lol.....
    pt.4 BACK DOOR MORNING AFTER
    drops tonight something cooking and i don't
    see no pots on the stove ! Thankz
     
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