Black Poetry : Open up your eyes

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Open up your eyes
    Theres a place
    Within your realm
    Remember when
    No sorrows
    not even a tear
    all fears buried
    happy cheers…just…
    Open up
    Open up your eyes
    The summer breeze
    so smooth upon the wind
    the sun
    the moon
    smiles the morning
    flower opens an exhale
    upon grace hands
    starz glistens…
    take the journey
    in time
    and remember....
    Open up your eyes
    Come within and see
    And hear the angels sing
    Movin towards the end
    But……….
    always a beginning…
    As the world turns…
    Open up
    Open up your eyes
    and forget the past
    And let the day begin….
    Open
    Open up
    Open up your eyes……..

    blkangel...2004
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was very pleasing and warm
    displayed from da heart outward nicely
    flow on .....i love da way ya pen sing
     
  3. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was so nice.

    Every day is a new day 2 shake the cobwebs from the minds & think anew.

    Really enjoyed this...

    Thank U.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I agree with positive, everyday is a new day to behold, very serene scribe.
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ ... your words mean alot...glad you felt the poem as you did
    peace and love my sweet Brother your support and love is wonderful

    PositiveMindset ..thank you glad you enjoyed it.... love the support Peace

    watzinaname .. thanks for da reply peace

    Angel
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and the angel speaks...nice piece queen.

    blak
     
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    I'm new here and really like your style of writing girfriend.
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    blakverb..thanks for the love and support

    J-Row welcome to destee glad ya enjoyed

    Peace and Love
    Angel
     
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    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    eyes wide open...
    this was really dope
    i like how da end
    is really da beginning...word
    one love
    khasm
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks khasm
    peace bro
    Angel
     
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