Black Poetry : Open my heart

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  1. GeneticSoul

    GeneticSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I Opened my heart my soul my mind to you
    cuz you was my bestfriend...**** still are but your words scar my heart
    maybe you're thru wit what i got ta say ....
    but you still remind me of when we used to sit on the patio listen to Tupac's "better day"....
    My heart was shining brite with u, my love was ever vesent and pure...
    but now its like a wilted flower just needs some water, light and a little love to come back to life
    for now my love's dealing with that pain and strife
    you know, when you find out the one you love no longer loves you back
    no longer wants you back, no longer misses you
    no longer kisses you... over the phone and says i love you in a slight wisper
    its like all of those things they used to do for you have been wiped away gone in a sudden twister
    and that twister's suckin all the things that ment so much to me a way from your heart and mind
    that mind that's no longer mine
    I opened my heart to you and you know it was broken before... twice even
    from past loves that left me hurt from their deciven
    and i even opened my heart to your past faults even before i mutter the words that sealed my emotion
    that motion that left my heart sailing a cross the ocean
    but i would have never let them go if i knew i would have been sailing alone
    I opened my heart to you
    told you things
    because you were my bestfriend before you ever became my love
    because you were the one who wouldnt break my heart? i thought
    because you were understanding
    " we were so oppsite we were perfect for eachother
    " all the books said that we need one another
    I opened my heart to you for all the wrong reasons
    i wasted my love to get the perfect season?
    i Opened my heart to someone i still want to love
    I told my most biggest fear....
    My fear of loving someone who didnt love me back
    and you attacked my heart wit that
    It ache hurt pains soooooooo strong
    My mind says its about right
    but my heart crys its wrong
    Yet i still open my heart to you through my words my lyrics my poem
    i still open my heart to you with hopes someday that i can have yours once again
    but dont worry i got some control ova my pains
    but just to let you again that aint no [email protected] game
    i aint gonna go crazy ova the junk you cause
    just remember theres still a thin line between love and hate
    when you finally realize wat you miss is me
    ill be all gone, locked out and ill throw away your key
    that spear key to my heart that i gave long ago
    wont work cuz ill find a locksmith and when he gets here.... you"ll know
    ____________________________________________________
    Feelings are so strong that the fill my mind and make it hurt like a headache
    :( Gen~Ethic Soul
     
  2. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    when love exits it's
    wound hurts like hell.

    i've learned...

    the safest route for a
    wounded heart- is a
    slow road to healing.

    thanks for sharing :)


    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco :heart:
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very emotionally posed. Feels like your whole world is just....gone, doesn't it? But eventually you learn that it's not your entire world, just a piece of it. Feeling this vibe.
     
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    feelin this vibe...
    in time your heart will heal...
    Angel
    Peace...
    likes ya write here very well said
     
  5. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very well posed

    awwww, I am so feelin you on this one. I been hurt and disappointed by so many people. If you can learn how to cautiously guard your heart while remaining an optimist, and have hope without being bitter, you will be the winner, my friend - not them. Peace.
     
  6. GeneticSoul

    GeneticSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks

    thats some good info

    thanks
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!!!
    i felt ya all the way it can be a real pain
    i been there my self once or twice
     
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    D**n, good, and definitely felt, a time or two or three!! Don't rush to find that locksmith, let him come to you. The greatest locksmith, however is just waiting to give you the right lock to your heart and the key to the one He sends to you!!
    Enjoyed this piece!
    Eternal
     
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    that spear key to my heart that i gave long ago
    wont work cuz ill find a locksmith and when he gets here.... you"ll know

    like this last line...

    flow on...flow on
     
  10. GeneticSoul

    GeneticSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thats one of min too

    its one of my fav lines in that piece that one and this one.....



    -i even opened my heart to your past faults even before i mutter the words that sealed my emotion
    that motion that left my heart sailing a cross the ocean
    but i would have never let them go if i knew i would have been sailing alone

    i write from my heart and youguys can really see that i display it that way.... thank you for that
     
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