Black Poetry : open me up...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thepoetsean, Apr 22, 2003.

  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i wish i could

    open me up
    but--
    i probab-ly
    wouldn't
    like
    how or who
    I
    be
    in-side
    I wouldn't like the
    "me"
    inside because
    "me"
    is infinitely
    deprived...

    so-so
    so-so-so

    in the lack thereof
    i couldn't express what effect
    the lack thereof has
    or does
    to the "me"

    cuz see
    i'm who she want me to be
    and can't express me--
    cuz it causes instability between
    the "me" inside and
    the she
    ex
    ter
    nal-ly
    in-trin
    sick-ly
    and peronali-ty
    wise I
    am not keeping it real inside
    I--
    wish i could open me up...


    sean.insighting.he

    (revisitationevolved)
     
  2. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i know i been missing...juss a lil sumfin i had to let go. hope y'all enjoy.


    sean.insighting.he

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    i REALLY REALLY like this...and i can relate 100%........
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    thepoetsean

    Nice, bruh...dapz....very nice.

    :D :toast:
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like dis one keep flowin i'll be watchin out fa you :)
     
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    O' yeah, thepoetsean, i felt like some one had taken bits of me and put them in this piece....sometimes i am afraid to look at the person inside because i think i would not only repell myself, but others around me if i really let the "me"...

    lo'
     
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    "I wouldn't like the
    "me"
    inside because
    "me"
    is infinitely
    deprived... "

    TPS, is your 'me' that deprived that you can't let it shine? Be real to yourself and don't live for others. Brotha man I can only tell you to apply...loved this...


    I'm just sayin...
     
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