Quiet Poetry Lounge : Open letter to God

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Nov 14, 2003.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dear God,
    She's not welcome here,
    she's not welcome anywhere.
    She's not even welcome
    in the house of the Lord.
    Since the pastor's tongue
    was sharp as a sword.
    He announced she did something
    She had to pay for.
    In God's house no less,
    cut straight to the core.
    What if she's an innocent?
    Caught in pure coincidence?
    Actions just misunderstood.
    Protests didn't do any good.
    Folks afraid to be seen with her,
    Lest they also be branded leper.
    Heaven help her for thine own sake,
    Not much more that she can take.
    She's not welcome here,
    she's not welcome anywhere.
     
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    my goodness this piece
    i have no words to express
    just want you to know
    that this is felted
    much love to you
    Peace
     
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    oh speechless...
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bluewater, Mzblkangel, there are those rare times when your soul just pours out onto paper. This was one of those times. Thankyou.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Olakuoto. hopefully the spirit will keep moving me to write. Thank you.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed the power of thee will keep one on path
    dis was awesome ...love it
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank goodness for a higher power. Glad you enjoyed it, thanks Rich.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    indeed....let it pour...when it hit
    love reading you thank you first...
    your welcome my sister:angel1:
     
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